Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

My writing friend, who shall remain nameless at this time, brought up an interesting point about Christian novels. She suggested that the protagonists and/or heroines seemed to be drop dead gorgeous—in other words, “the beautiful people”. To quote her:

 

“What message does it send to the reader when your characters are model perfect? If you have physically ‘beautiful’ people in your book, there should be a reason OTHER than driving that initial attraction.”  

 

Her words do ring true in many circumstances. Inarguable in fact. So. What’s the reason for this?

 

Let’s look at film. Even the most beautiful and most handsome of actors often get “scuffed” up to detract from their looks to play certain characters. Some of them simply can’t hide their physical beauty no matter how much makeup goes to work on subduing it. And spread across the big screen, the less attractive people often play villains and seem perfectly cast in those roles. The ugly duckling prospects often blossom into magnificent mallards through the course of story. And let’s be honest here, don’t we all enjoy viewing beauty or what we perceive as beauty? However, likewise, if that beautiful creature becomes a sordid villain, we can just as easily hate the beauty for tricking us into finding it pleasing.

 

Looking to the bible in reference to women:

 

“Charm is deceptive, and beauty is fleeting, but a woman who fears the Lord is to be praised.” Proverbs 31:30 (NIV)

 

I find it interesting that when Jesus is described in Isaiah, it makes reference to his appearance:

 

“He had no beauty or majesty to attract us to him, nothing in his appearance that we should desire him.” Isaiah 53:2b (NIV)

 

Fascinating to note how physical attractiveness is downplayed in these two important passages.

 

And certainly Christians note but often fail to remember that God looks at the heart of an individual. How He chooses to create is related to how He intends to use an individual, the plans He will set in motion if that person turns back to Him for their purpose and role in this life on earth. He is no respecter of persons.

 

As a little girl, I can testify to feeling ugly. And I’ve certainly never ever felt “beautiful”. But I also confess I make many of my characters attractive and since I write love stories, these characters do appear to be beautiful or handsome to one another. It’s supposed to be representative of the “eye of the beholder” concept, but clearly many of my characters aren’t lacking in the looks department.

 

Perhaps the genre can be indicative of placing emphasis on physical descriptions of characters. I know many authors who write thrillers downplay these descriptions. And other authors explain they like the readers to fill in any blanks other than perhaps the stature and size of a character.

 

Romance requires attraction. How that “attraction” is executed isn’t limited to physical descriptions of characters. Some of you readers may recall an older suspense series written by Terri Blackstock (Cape Refuge Series) where one side of the heroine’s face bore the scars of being caught in a fire as a child. The other half of her face and her spunk attract the local Police Chief who must discover the perpetrator of a crime. By using the “ugliness” of scars and the “beauty” that remained, Terri tapped into multiple levels of basic attraction, human pain, and love.

 

Where there is attraction, it seems there must be some attention paid to what comprises that reaction between characters. At some point, a physical attribute usually shows up. How often or how detailed is the author’s choice and/or preference—and the result produces the reader’s favor, disdain, or indifference.

 

Part of this process can be negated by the full portraits on book covers. From comments on various blogs, the full-on face revelations aren’t particularly appreciated by many readers who also enjoy letting the words in the stories paint the portraits of the characters. (Publishers apparently disagree about their popularity.)

 

“The beautiful people” appear on the pages of all kinds of novels—the reactions to that probably varied. Do “beautiful” characters offend you in your reading? Any thoughts about “the beautiful people”?

 

 

God, we know you see our hearts, and we know that you own the creative process. You are no respecter of persons, and we thank you for that. Help us to see with your eyes, Lord. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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10 responses to “The Beautiful People?”

  1. Brenda Avatar

    That isn’t just Christian novels, as the friend points out. That’s EVERYWHERE. God looks at the heart, but the most noble person in the universe is still just a mere human and humans are genetically programmed to seek out beauty. And’s its one of the few things in life upon which there is somewhat of a standard agreement on what constitutes beauty (yes and we’re also genetically programmed to split hairs so there is someone out there ready to argue that point).
    Beautiful people in stories don’t bother me. After all, I want to read stories that are larger than life, and part of that experience is good looking characters. After all, a writer is generally busy examining what’s not so good looking on the inside.
    What woman, Christian or not, hasn’t made a snarky comment about some Barbie type chick we come across, in life or on the screen? But we’d be just as snarky if they used on the screen a woman who was as wide as she was tall and had a crater face. And I can’t imagine reading about an action hero who met that description.
    In entertainment, as in life, we can make ’em look as good as can be, but the real deal is what’s on the inside.

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  2. dayle Avatar
    dayle

    In my novel, I purposefully conveyed the idea that though the main character saw great beauty in the romantic interest, she is not a universal beauty as found in most novels. That’s tricky because of the pov issue.
    Another thought: maybe readers like to imagine themselves as the character. No one wants to imagine themselves as ugly.

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  3. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    Excellent food for thought, Nicole.
    Yes, I’ll admit to giving you that quote, and I stand by it. I know I’m in the minority. It’s just a pet-peave of mine when books are written starring hyper-gorgeous people, when the characters are Hollywood or modelesque. Then, I typically find myself rolling my eyes. Sorry, can’t relate.
    Now, beautiful in the eyes of the love-interest, that’s a different story, but I’d say that’s an atypical representation.
    There’s a whole world between Hollywood & ugly or misfigured too, and that’s called Normal. To me, it adds dimension to a character when they see others as God sees them as it says in 1 Samuel 16:7:
    “Do not consider his appearance or his height, for I have rejected him. The Lord does not look at the things man looks at. Man looks at the outward appearance, but the Lord looks at the heart.”
    I’d love to see Christian fiction mature beyond the appearance-driven society we live in.
    Actually, I have a blogsworth of thoughts on this, but I’ll be quiet now. 🙂
    Thanks for letting me vent, Nicole.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    Brenda, thanks for the “real” comments. Point taken and well expressed.
    Dayle, you did a good job of that, too. And I think you’re right about a reader desiring to identify with a character.
    Brenda A., thanks for “outing” yourself, and I hope you will blog about this from your perspective because it’s a valid point. However, I think Brenda is correct in pointing out it isn’t just Christian novels.
    Also, I agree “normal” can be a far cry from beautiful to ugly to disfigured, and making that clear in story is sometimes difficult when explaining an attraction to someone. I don’t think it’s farfetched to suggest that the first attraction to someone is physical appearance or even sex appeal. It’s only after that initial attraction that some people (not all) strive to find out what’s underneath their perceived attraction to the other person’s beauty/handsomeness.

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  5. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    You’re absolutely right that Christian novels aren’t alone in being guilty of this. Far from it. It’s actually a societal issue, I believe. And, it’s true that we all make initial judgments & have first impressions based on appearance.
    Now, that you’ve got me thinking, you’ve inspired me to blog about this next week. Now to organize my thoughts by then.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    I’ll look forward to your thoughts, Brenda.

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  7. BK Jackson Avatar

    Well if you examine other biblical examples it goes way back to the beginnings. Saul, selected as first king of Israel was described (I don’t have the Bible in front of me so I can’t be exact) handsome and quite literally standing head and shoulders above the rest. King David was hadsome and ruddy in appearance. And Boaz didn’t say “That Ruth. What a hag. I think I’ll marry her.” 😎
    I guess like every other aspect of writing, it’s up to us to create quality characters, regardless of what they look like.

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  8. Nicole Avatar

    Truth, Brenda. Truth.

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  9. Kristen Torres-Toro Avatar

    The fact that it’s everywhere means it isn’t reality. Sometimes I want to see reality, but sometimes I want an escape from it too.

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  10. Nicole Avatar

    As you know, K, physical reality on planet earth comes in all kinds. No wonder we sometimes need an escape from it, huh?

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