
The first line can grab a reader in a proverbial heartbeat. Those of us who are patient readers don't demand an all-out knockout punch in the first line, but, frankly, it's a treat when one accomplishes that initial thrill of admiration or excitement or intrigue.
Here's the catch: as a reader, are you willing to advance in the novel if the first line possibly is too harsh, offends you, or startles you in a possibly negative way?
Some readers are not offended easily. They're reading troopers. I would classify myself as one of those. Becoming "offended" is off-putting because of what it's become in our culture. The first line in Then . . . you will unintentionally "offend" some readers. I can tell you upfront who these readers are: they are the majority readers of traditionally published Christian fiction. They are the readers who gave Redeeming Love and The Masterpiece 1-star reviews. They are the readers who question an author's Christianity because they have become offended at a word, a circumstance, some measure of theology, a character's reaction, etc. They are the readers who search for the many novels with the "clean" Christian fiction labels insinuating that authentically portrayed attraction and realistic romance are somehow "dirty".
Just some thoughts on that "first line" impact.
Father, you know my heart. You know I never want to write anything that offends you. It's all about you. Thank you for all that you've given me and done for me. I have no words large enough to express my gratitude. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.