Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

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    If I could write a genuine thriller, I would. I know I could create the hero without a hitch. I don't think the characters would be a problem. But that's where my abilities as a writer stop. Even attempting the research, besides being totally intimidating, would be a stopper because I have zero sources. And sources for thriller writing are a must. Not to mention complex contemporary plots with a breakneck tempo, lots of weapons and violence to neutralize the evil enemies in order to save the country.  

    Admiration for Vince Flynn was off the charts for me. Having recently reread Consent to Kill (my favorite) and now reading Protect and Defend, I can't tell you what a pleasure it is to revisit his Mitch Rapp stories. Kyle Mills filled in admirably after Vince left this world, and soon Don Bentley's first effort Capture or Kill will be joining the Mitch Rapp Saga. If you've read any of Don's novels (and I highly recommend the Matt Drake Series), you know his stories are terrific thrillers. 

    Taking up with an established character – especially one as iconic as Mitch Rapp – has to be a true challenge because in order to please the faithful readers of a series, the author has to be immersed in who the character is due to any serious deviation from that personality and his abilities will be unacceptable.

    Some of you know I wrote some Fan Fiction with Mitch Rapp meeting the woman I thought he should be with, having never much cared for Rapp's choices for serious relationships. In that brief encounter I thought I nailed his character fairly well – if I do say so myself. But then – that's what I'm good at: anything that hints of possible romance? That I can do.  

    But if I could write a thriller? I would! 

     

    Father, you know me from the inside out, created me to be who I am. Thank you is never enough for all that you've done for me in my life. That you rescued me so many years ago . . . I'm beyond grateful. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    I loved this song back in the day. Still do. Great song by Jr. Walker and the Allstars. 

     

    Father, thank you for all the gifts and talents to your musicians. May each one know their wonderful talent is a gift from you: the lover of their souls. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    Forgotten War by Don Bentley is Book 4 in A Matt Drake Novel Series.

    True patriots remember the shock and unjustifiable horror of Benghazi. Those same patriots remember the more recent unforgivable betrayal and horror of the withdrawal from Afghanistan. By Don's own admission in the Author Notes, he used his "poetic license" to rearrange the timelines of historical occurrences following his previous novel Hostile Intent.  

    When the cruelties of war stick with soldiers of all ages and across all services, most, when given a chance, want to rectify those events and bring some form of justice, equivalence, or resolution to them. Forgotten War is a story of all kinds of betrayals with every effort to rectify what went wrong. Matt's best friend (Frodo) has suddenly seemed to accept his fate during a shocking incident at a favorite bar with Frodo's fiancée Katherine, Matt, and Matt's wife Laila who has yet to arrive. 

    What Matt learns afterward, he refuses to believe and immediately sets out to set things straight even when it seems to be impossible because it all goes back to Afghanistan. The unusual kicker involves a wayward green-card carrying 19 yr. old girl who somehow decided she was capable of returning to Afghanistan to attend a friend's wedding and is now missing. This is the odd reason Laila was late to the gathering with Frodo and Katherine. 

    When mysterious "coincidences" related to members of a particular mission involving the Unit from 2011 in Afghanistan surface, Matt rushes to the isolated home of one of those members (Jason) which turns out to be a goat ranch. Requiring a clandestine approach because of suspicious activity, Matt is considerably outnumbered until Jason appears from his house to join the battle. After the two of them neutralize the conflict, those "coincidences" are examined and determined to be anything but "accidents." 

    Trying to make the connections to all parties involved in order to free up the truth and Frodo, Matt is given the shut down from his DIA boss James Glass because of the ongoing dangerous chaos in Afghanistan. Declaring himself on vacation, Matt does what he does best: he finds a camouflaged way to leave the country for Afghanistan with Jason, a former military female Apache helicopter pilot Dee, and a former SEAL Garrett who has as much distaste for Matt as Matt does for him. 

    Reading a Don Bentley thriller is exhausting. I can understand a reader taking the necessary time to read it cover to cover in one sitting, but the adrenaline pumping stories render me in desperate need of a break after a few chapters. The proverbial "Murphy's Law" is always in action during Matt's best efforts and the crew he takes on this adventure are gut-punched all along the way. It's exciting, disturbing, revealing, and a thrill-ride from the moment they finally set down their private plane in Afghanistan. One thing you can count on from Don is realistic battle scenes, the necessary contingencies, the personal panics which can't be expressed or demonstrated when the odds have suddenly turned against the plan. 

    Kudos to Don for telling the ugly, inexcusable tale of the Afghanistan debacle, the choices and terrible betrayals that left American soldiers dead and Afghani aids and other Americans without protection from the ruthless Taliban. It should never be a forgotten war with the years and years of sacrifices to try to bring some order to a country who fought it all along the way. Maybe within the pages of Forgotten War, people can have a clearer realization of the sorrow that took place there and that still threatens the lives of decent people. 

    (Some profanity.) 

     

    Father, you know all of our hearts. We can't fool you. Please continue to shine your face upon Don, meet his needs, bless him and his family, and inspire those stories you have just for him to tell. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

     

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         The Pharisees, who loved money, heard all this and were sneering at Jesus. He said to them, "You are the ones who justify yourselves in the eyes of men, but God knows your hearts. What is highly valued among men is detestable in God's sight."

     

    Luke 16:14-15 (NIV)

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    The first two chapters of my one and only mystery/police procedural Race.

    MONDAY

    One

    It was hard to say what witnesses noticed first—the shrill piercing screams or the nearly naked young woman uttering them. Apparently she woke up next to a dead boyfriend, both of them allegedly passed out from too much alcohol consumption. The designated “sleeping” tack rooms at the track were located at the end of the long shedrows. Though not large this couple’s was tidy with a few creature comforts such as the mounted flat screen, a queen-size bed, a sturdy and colorful throw rug, a small locked black metal file box, and what looked like a well-preserved near-antique chest of drawers with a pole rigged above it to hang clothes on.

         When I arrived at the scene at 3:30 AM, Carmella Ortiz stood barefoot on the dirt in the shedrow, now clad in the couple’s bedspread concealing her apparently barely there lingerie. She spoke fast with intermittent tears and a hint of a Latino accent. Her story was she’d gone over to her sister’s place for some girls’ night-out event and proceeded to get too drunk to drive back, so her sister dropped her off at one of the racetrack gates, and after she staggered into the tack room, she passed out. When I spoke to her I asked if Mr. Wonderful was present at the time, she said she thought so but couldn’t really remember. Must’ve been some girls’ night-out. Easy to verify.

         After speaking with the young woman, I took a few moments to survey the group huddling behind the tape and to inhale the familiar fragrant aroma of horses, listening to the whooshes of their nostrils, some of them pawing their hard rubber mats at the fronts of stalls wondering what all the commotion was about. Brought back memories of high school summers spent working at the track, of underage drinking and girls who liked taking their clothes off, guys who loved it when they did. Funny how some things never change. 

         Next I needed to ascertain Mr. Wonderful’s whereabouts the previous night and wait for the determination of cause of death. Turned out his name was Roman Diego, the assistant trainer for Walter Casey who was kind of a local big-shot, perennially in the top five leading trainers. Lying on his right side at the edge of the bed, Roman’s only clothing was the beige sheet covering his manhood, no blood anywhere, and it looked like he fell asleep—or passed out—and never woke up. Long dark wavy hair obscured his face, but his torso and left arm bent at the elbow and resting on the mattress were well-muscled which made me think he probably exercised the Thoroughbreds at his barn.

         The crime scene tape forbade entrance to the immediate area which would surely annoy the people who had to work at this end of the barn and live in the neighboring tack rooms, not to mention spook a few Thoroughbreds with its unfamiliar yellow color flapping in the cool breeze.

         Death always presents an inconvenience.

    Two

    A long day ahead presented itself accompanied by the gut feeling this was indeed a homicide and it wasn’t going to be an easy solve. My partner Jesse Davidson called to tell me he was en route. The ME arrived shortly after Jesse’s call. Doctor Loren Walsh set the initial estimate of time of death at sometime between midnight and 3 AM., a fairly precise window, putting the girlfriend at the top of my suspect list if natural causes were ruled out.

         Racetrack security, our patrol officers, and Detectives Phil Phelps and Mark Griffin helped keep the group outside the tape from crowding the scene and separated and contained those who first arrived because of Carmella’s frantic screaming. At my request they’d contacted the particular guard who manned the gate during the shift when Carmella supposedly arrived back at the track and sent a replacement to relieve him so he could come and talk to us.

         We needed to notify the owner of the racetrack and inform him of our investigation. No doubt he wouldn’t want this publicized and neither did we, but word always manages to get out. I’d send Detective Griffin to do this after we got done with the preliminaries.

         The official cameras flashed recording the scene, and the two other detectives converged to get interviews after discouraging those with cell phones attempting to take pictures although the crime scene itself was not visible.

         Jesse arrived looking a whole lot more refreshed than anyone should at this hour. I’m obsessive about how people dress so I notice Jesse’s attire. Dapper dude that he was, he’d elected to wear pressed Levis and some kind of Redwing boots with his professionally cleaned button-down pale yellow shirt with the one button undone at the neck to expose the tight-curving collar of a blinding white T-shirt, and his black leather jacket which he tossed into his car to don his ballistic vest. The brisk morning air sent a shiver more than once under my light POLICE windbreaker, my polo shirtsleeves not providing much warmth in spite of the extra layer my vest provided.

         “So. Guy dies in his sleep? Girlfriend can’t remember if she’s in bed with him? Convenient, huh?”

         “Looks that way.”

         “That her over there?”

         “Uh-huh.”

         “Kinda hot, huh? How ‘bout him? He a looker too?”

         “Oh yeah.”

         “Okay. We find the other guys and gals these two’ve been sleepin’ with and we got a suspect pool. If we need one.”

         “Pretty much.”

     

    Father, thank you for every one of these stories, every one. Apart from you, I can do nothing. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    My 2-year-old self. Says an awful lot about then . . . and now! 

    Caption this picture. (Be nice!)

     

    Father, thank you for giving me the best parents, the loving home, my big brother, and a truly wonderful childhood. And thank you for your patience when I went astray. You rescued me, and I am eternally grateful. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    Hostile Intent by Don Bentley is the third book in A Matt Drake Novel Series.

    Matt Drake is back. And for all the sarcasm, smart a*$ commentary, he's a dangerous man who has a code of honor. He pays his debts. When a man who saved not only his life but the life of his wife (Laila), shows up in Vienna at the American Embassy to share critical information and says he'll only talk to Matt Drake, the DIA's top case officer heads directly there. 

    As is always the case with Matt, everything goes south, north, east, and west in trying to find a safe place to get the information from "the Irishman" Nolan Burke, former member of the Real IRA. And when there's critical information involved, you can bet the farm that one of the parties involved will be the Russian contingent of whatever elements of their alphabet spec ops agencies is sent to procure that information or silence it. It appears that this information is exactly as Nolan hinted because not too long after Matt finds Nolan, they're separated. 

    When Matt is finally able to locate Nolan after a run-in with Vienna's blonde first female Director of the BVT (Intelligence), he is forced to take on the Russian special unit that is "holding" Burke. With little time to plan, he manages to get a few words with Nolan. Needless to say, utter chaos precluded those words. 

    Timing is at critical mass as the invasion of Ukraine seems imminent. The hidden discovery about the whole chaotic swirl of countries, agencies, contingencies, war, operators, assists and debts owed and paid, presents a heretofore unknown threat. 

    And there you have the multiple storylines within a story that gives you Russia, Ukraine, Vienna, Israel, and the USA. It's no small endeavor to pay back the riddle of Burke's request. 

    Hostile Intent is an orderly – but convoluted – account of the severe dangers following Matt Drake around as he and his best friend Frodo try to out-maneuver what turns out to be more than one enemy. Unbelievable risks, requests, new "partners," and dread are all part of the scary task. Matt's humorous thoughts and sarcastic chitchat with his Israeli counterpart will at times make the reader laugh – or at least smile. There's some great dialogue involved. Matt's heroics as well as his vulnerabilities are evident in the struggle. 

    Bottom line: If you want to read thrillers, you want to read a Don Bentley series. A Matt Drake Novel Series will definitely give you an uptick in your heartbeat. 

    (Some profanity.) 

     

    Father, only you know our hearts and desires. I pray you would continue to shine your face upon Don and his family and fill him up with stories for his next projects. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    One of Bob Dylan's original hits. One thing about Dylan's songs, the lyrics always said interesting things from "those days." Love him or hate him, he was a talented man with an unusual voice. 

     

    Father, rescue those who come to you. We're all desperate for Jesus. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

     

     

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    For those of us authors who don't happen to be bestsellers, we definitely go through the "Monday Musings." 

    I didn't pick the romance/love story genre nor did I pick Christian Fiction. "They" picked me. Before the Lord rescued me, I went through some serious years of – for genuine lack of a better word – rebellion. Suffice it to say, I lived a lifestyle for a while which wasn't the best. And it wasn't what I truly wanted, but I was essentially trying it out because in the big picture I was unhappy. In hindsight it was because I was lost. Having said that, I know life from both perspectives: without Jesus and with Jesus. 

    And, no, knowing Jesus didn't cause me to be instantaneously "perfect," but through Him, I learned how to be better. As much effort as I put into it, I got more than anything the world could offer or match. 

    He's the One who told me to write my first novel. He's the One who sustains me and gives me stories. Those stories are filled with the contrasts of "lost and saved." Realistically. 

    So. There are literally millions of romance novels and love stories of all kinds in the reading world. How does one author build an audience for enough readers to sustain that audience? Especially when this author is a terrible marketer. And then I ask myself: Am I the only one who loves my writing? And should I even say that? The reason I love it is because it's the kind of romance/love stories I want to read. There are very few of them in this genre in Christain Fiction. Which is why I primarily read thrillers/mystery/suspense.  

    Just my Monday Musings . . . 

     

    Father, you know me. You know my every thought and whim. You know my every need. You are the One who sustains me. Thank you is never enough. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    The heavens declare the glory of God;

      the skies proclaim the work of His hands.

    Day after day they pour forth speech;

      night after night they display knowledge.

    There is no speech or language

      where their voice is not heard.

    Their voice goes out into all the earth,

      their words to the ends of the earth.

    In the heavens he has pitched a tent for the sun,

      which is like a bridegroom coming forth

         from his pavilion.

      like a champion rejoicing to run his course.

    It rises at one end of the heavens 

      and makes its circuit to the other;

      nothing is hidden from its heat.

    The law of the Lord is perfect,

      reviving the soul.

    The statutes of the Lord are trustworthy,

      making wise the simple.

    The precepts of the Lord are radiant,

      giving light to the eyes.

    The fear of the Lord is pure, enduring forever.

    The ordinances of the Lord are sure

      and altogether righteous.

    They are more precious than gold,

      than much pure gold; 

    they are sweeter than honey,

      than honey from the comb. 

    By them is your servant warned;

      in keeping them there is great reward.

    Who can discern his errors?

      Forgive my hidden faults.

    Keep your servant also from willful sins;

      may they not rule over me.

    Then I will be blameless,

      innocent of great transgression.

    May the words of my mouth and the meditation

           of my heart

      be pleasing in your sight,

      O Lord, my Rock and my Redeemer.

     

    Psalm 19 (NIV)