Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

Rules are essential. We all know that from being children, having children, observing the children of others. Not to mention those children becoming adults. I actually appreciate good rules. Rules that make sense. Rules that provide logical boundaries to irrational, selfish, or harmful behavior. Rules that have their foundations in the Ten Commandments. Those are simple, logical, and pertinent rules. Impossible to keep but absolutely astute markers of human weaknesses and rule breaking tendencies.

Alright. So. Uniformity? There is value in uniformity. If you walk into an establishment where the employees wear something to identify them, it is helpful—even if it’s only a uniform type of nametag. That way you don’t go asking another customer if they can help you find something. That has actually happened to me—I must look helpful. Or maybe I just looked like I should be working there.

If any of you have ever been interested in screenwriting, you know there is a format for writing a script. You can buy copies of film scripts from different places to use as examples plus you can buy software to download script writing programs. There is a technically uniform method for scripts, and without using it you won’t get a first look from professionals.

Okay. Next of course is novels. Rules. Uniformity. Necessary? Yes. And somewhat no. Why somewhat no? Because style is a part of creativity. And while the objective is to make a quality story engage and sustain a reader’s interest, does it have to look exactly like every other novel when it’s printed?

Many professionals in publishing hate italics. If you doubt that, jet over to Chip MacGregor’s blog and read Zondervan editor Andy Meisenheimer’s post. In the comments my opinion is in the decided minority. However, the best reason given against italics, in my opinion, is Rebecca Luella Miller’s where she states she finds them hard to read. That’s a legitimate complaint. Previously, I’d read similar hatred for italics from award winning author Angela Hunt.

The argument against them is—at least I think this is the argument—that a (herewego) good writer shouldn’t need to use them to indicate POV changes or interior monologue or God’s thoughts/words or the character’s thoughts. Big surprise I disagree. So, what we’re advocating here is no change in text when a character reacts silently to someone else’s words or actions, when God speaks to one character privately, when an interior monologue takes place in the middle of a scene or action requiring both overt and silent reaction/commentary from the character(s). That a good writer can pull off interior monologue or simple silent reactions by changing tense in the middle of dialogue or action without causing a glitch in the reading . . . Yeah? Hmmm. Show me. I want to see what this looks like.

Personally, I don’t care if a writer chooses not to use italics if, and honestly I think it’s a pretty big if in some cases, that writer can pull it off effectively. Great. Do it. And if a writer decides to use italics to indicate any changes in anything, I say fine. Do it. Why in the world of writing do we have to make some fairly inconsequential writing tools “right” and other things suddenly “wrong” in this business of creating novels?

Now if you choose to write as T. S. Eliot did in his poems, that would distract me in novel form. I like some structure and capitals. I like italics. I like sections occasionally instead of chapters. I like forewords, prologues, epilogues, preludes, and all sorts of variety in the novels I read. I like the chapters titled, numbered with a number or the number written out in varying fonts. I even like bold type once in awhile. It’s fun to see the variations in creativity—and, yes, as long as the story is a good one.

I cannot imagine why it has to be narrowed down to limited usages. To suggest italics are an illustration of a method used by an inexperienced or lesser quality writer is bizarre to me. And not just because I use them. But because I happen to like them if they work within a story I’m reading.

Uniformity? I guess it’s just another point of disagreement in the ever widening chasm between me and the current world of publishing.

Aren’t we just so smug sometimes? Professionals (or not) passing judgment on methodologies, styles, lengths, formats, types, voices, and whatever else we decide we don’t like, declaring them inferior. Don’t get me wrong—if it’s your company, your establishment, you can use what you want, like best, and have decided works for you, but, geez, who are you to criticize someone else’s ways to communicate their stories in something so subjective as the appeal of writing?

Give me versatility in writing novels and humility in producing and reading them. Please.

Lord, you know my heart here. Please help me not to be critical. Please help me to keep doing what you would have me do. Please continue to give me your encouragement and help me to focus on what is truly important. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

*PLEASE PRAY FOR KRISTY DYKES*

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16 responses to “Uniformity”

  1. Mark Harbeson Avatar

    I think the real bottom line is this: if you don’t want to see italics, then tell us what you want to see instead. Notice that Chip and Andy do not offer any real solutions here.

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  2. dayle Avatar

    I agree, Nicole.
    We don’t want every novel looking exactly the same. And, if we are all edited to the same micro standards, it is possible that narratives may start sounding similiar.
    I’m currently reading a book by a well known bestseller. She did not use italics for thought and she didn’t label the thought. She simply went to first-person. To me it worked, but I can see it now: If I do it, I’ll have the editor tell me that I need to quit switching “person” and they’ll recommend some books for me to read so I can “learn” and reject me because I’m not “ready”.

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  3. Nicole Avatar

    I appreciate that an editor has his/her preferences in their reading/writing repetoire. I do. However, if you read as many novels as I do from today’s CBA offerings, you will find that the majority of them are very much the same in format and style. That’s not to say that either the author or editor is not good because that is definitely not what I’m saying. For me, the greater amount of current CBA novels are uniform, making them predictable and formulaic where style and format issues are concerned. This is their perogative–it’s their money producing books in an ever expanding market. Frankly, I find those particular methods (when mass produced) boring, and I apologize for the offense here, but to suggest there is an “only” way to write or to demonstrate being a “good” writer seems arrogant to me. By declaring such a thing, you are eliminating readers/writers like me who enjoy the variety in writing styles, formats, etc., and somehow I have a hard time believing I might be the only one.

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  4. dayle Avatar

    I think my other comment about Publishing peer pressure might be at work here.
    Publishers want to appear on the cutting edge, so they are scared to put their name on a book that goes outside of the strict parameters because they don’t want to be laughed at. Maybe CBA is a little sensitive because of all the criticism they’ve gotten in the past. The quality is certainly there, they have nothing to be embarassed about. But some wounds never heal.

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  5. Nicole Avatar

    As usual, Dayle, you may have just spawned tomorrow’s post . . .

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  6. Angie Hunt Avatar

    First of all, I doubt that anyone truly hates italics. Seems an awful lot of emotion to expend on a font.
    Second, italics are like everything else–they have their proper place. It’s the overuse of them that grows tedious because THEY GROW HARD TO READ. Very simple.
    Third, it’s not just Christian editors/authors/agents who advise against their overuse, it’s the “standard” guys. Read “Self-editing for fiction writers” or just about any book on writing fiction.
    Fourth, any character speaking should be in quotes. 🙂 Even God.
    Fifth–interior monologue is a valid technique, but like any other, it should be learned. It’s very simple and logical once you get the hang of it. And it doesn’t require italics.
    I used to use itals all the time. But then I learned how to get around them–for the purpose of avoiding reader eyestrain.
    Italics are certainly not worth mounting a campaign for or against. What’s next, commas?
    Angie

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  7. Nicole Avatar

    Angie, forgive me for over usage of the word “hate”. Not fair when applying it to someone else’s opinion of something.
    As I said, RLM’s claim that they are hard to read was the most legitimate reason to me.
    And I realize it’s not just the standard for Christian publishers, but here I mostly comment on CBA publishing–from an outsider’s view, as I mentioned. These are my opinions based on that outsider POV, discussions with CBA authors, editors, and agents. I don’t pretend to be an authority, but I have formed opinions based on these communications and professionals’ blogs. Not that my opinion even matters–I’m well aware of that.
    I still like variety. I don’t equate the use of italics with particular writing skills, either good or bad. I understand the “hard to read” reason, and I consider that legitimate. However, that was not mentioned as a viable reason not to use them but rather the indication or implication was that someone who uses them is an inferior writer.
    Appreciate you stopping by, Angie.

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  8. dayle Avatar

    Personally, I love the one word italicized for emphasis if it’s not overdone.
    But several lines of italics are hard on the eyes. Some publishers have solved this by using a different non-italicized font.

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  9. Mark Harbeson Avatar

    There were 33 comments on the other blog about this issue at my last check. I’m amazed that people can debate something so trivial for so long and with so much passion!

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  10. dayle Avatar

    I think it’s more about the whole dynamic, Mark.
    This is just the latest pressure relief valve in this debate boiler.

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  11. Kay Avatar
    Kay

    I don’t really care one way or the other. But I see your point about the implication that only bad writers use them.
    Karen Kingsbury is one of the best selling authors in the CBA, I think. She certainly has a lot of books out there, anyway.
    She uses them; as well as other well know authors that I have read. So the implication is clearly unfounded.
    The eye-strain thing is valid, although they don’t bother me personally.

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  12. Nicole Avatar

    Mark, I think the passion comes from the establishing of “laws” by those who wield the power to say yes or no to your manuscript. Now, admittedly, the pros said they wouldn’t systematically reject a ms. with italics usage, but when they say they don’t like something and it shows up–there are too many more in the stack to waste their time sifting through the one with the italics.
    Without exception the editors have said they are more looking for a reason to reject than to continue because of the sheer volume of manuscripts–and these are the solicited ones.
    For you it might not be a hot button issue, and perhaps with your flexible attitude, you can adhere to the mixture of demands. For me, some of them just cut across the grain of my particular creative passions and feel like a boot on my neck. Can’t help it, I guess, or maybe it’s really that I don’t see the reason for some of the demands. If listed more as preferences and opinions, I would ignore them and classify them as subjectivity. It’s the what I consider unfounded insinuations that bug me.

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  13. Mark Harbeson Avatar

    Well, I know better than to ask you to remove your passion, Nicole. Might as well remove the fizz from a soda.
    I see your point, though. It becomes less trivial when somebody has an excuse to throw away your manuscript because of it.

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  14. Nicole Avatar

    And nobody likes flat Coke, especially me!

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  15. Mir Avatar

    I love–and use–italics for emphasis, and if I’m writing 3rd person, I like to have a first person thought in italics.
    Long lines of italics are very wearing (and I’ve seen them used in flashback that way and have the urge to skip those passages). Small sprinklings of italics I find aesthetically quite pleasing, sort of the way the unexpected curving line adds interest to a sharply-angled composition in art. It’s refreshing to my eyes to see a change to make me perk up.
    MIr

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  16. Nicole Avatar

    Well put, Mir. And thanks for stopping by.

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