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Robin Parrish writes speculative fiction. And in Nightmare he writes Paranormal Speculative Fiction. I read Robin’s first book in the Dominion Trilogy titled Relentless. Through no fault of Robin’s, I misunderstood the back cover copy of the storyline or I wouldn’t have bought the book. It’s no secret I’m not a fan of most varieties of speculative fiction.

 

Nightmare begins with the first person telling of a trip to a popular amusement park by the name of Ghost Town from Maia Peters who isn’t sure why she agreed to accompany the two girls, one of them last year’s roommate at college. Maia’s parents are world-renowned paranormal specialists so Maia isn’t easily impressed by cheesy attempts at duplicating ghostly events with Hollywood-like special effects in an amusement park’s haunted house. So as the wait in a long line finally gives their group of three entrance to the old house, Maia quickly spots all the gimmicks. But just as their tour is about to conclude, a familiar face appears to Maia and says in the voice to match, “The nightmare is coming” before the girlfriend’s face vanishes into a mist. Soon after this experience Maia learns her friend is missing.

 

When sought out by the missing girl’s fiancé, Maia engages in an unlikely liaison to find Jordin, the now missing girl who hired Maia to take her to every well-known haunted establishment across the country. Since the wealthy Jordin had the money to foot the bills and buy all the necessary equipment to record and photograph any manifestations, Maia finally agreed to take her. Having grown up visiting these places, Maia’s expertise and usually unflappable demeanor keep Jordin grounded when things get weird.

 

Jordin’s fiancé Derek maintains his different take on the paranormal activity, and Maia, a Catholic, doesn’t take his Christian perspective seriously, having grown up with precise definitions for specific paranormal experiences and sightings. When a weird mark appears on the back of Jordin’s and another girl’s necks just before they disappear, Maia, Derek, and a curious journalist set out to discover the connection between a corporation out of Copenhagen, a concealed location in upstate New York, and the fleeting appearances of a ghostlike Jordin. 

 

First of all, Robin has done his homework on the paranormal. Each place pictured and described in Nightmare is authentic and documented as a haven for paranormal activity. The descriptions of sightings and the definition of terms used by enthusiasts relay the way these specialists view such things. Since Maia is telling this story, we receive the information as matters of fact. Derek brings in the accepted Christian viewpoint which Maia, although considering herself a believer, disputes. Her condescending attitude toward Derek gradually dissipates as she views his courage and determination to find and rescue the girl he loves.

 

The speculative concept of this novel demonstrates the workings and possibly the wrestlings of Robin’s mind. He’s a good writer—I thought so with Relentless, but I didn’t share nor do I share his enthusiasm for speculation: contemporary, futuristic, or otherwise. I think he stretches his thinking to interesting proportions, but these expanded concepts stray too far from biblical explanations to even make me wonder “What if?” 

 

Nightmare qualifies as Speculative Paranormal Suspense and will suit young adult/college age readers in particular as I think Robin portrayed the age and overall character of young people accurately. The weakness for me (besides its speculative concept): both Maia and Jordin aren’t particularly attractive characters. Maia is almost cold, too pragmatic, and Jordin is senseless in her obsession, willing to subject herself to the very opposite of what she supposedly believes. Derek is the only admirable character, displaying passion, determination, and an unexplainable devotion to Jordin while maintaining a strong faith in the Lord and His power.

 

 

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http://http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0764206079 

 

Father, please continue to lead Robin in his writing and in all of his efforts to honor you. Encourage him with your direction and guidance in all that he does. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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8 responses to “A living . . . Nightmare”

  1. April Avatar

    Thanks, Nicole for explaining more about the story. In all honesty, it just made me want to know the plot details and the ending more. 🙂 I just can’t bring myself to finish the story in order to satisfy my curiosity. I think the paranormal should be trod carefully, and immersing myself in it by finishing the book is just not a good idea for me. But I appreciate your honest review.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    I think you’re wise for your position. It’s good to know yourself, April. Thanks for checking it out here.

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  3. A. J. Walker Avatar
    A. J. Walker

    Thank you for reviewing the book.
    No disrespect to the author, but I can cross this one of my list to read. Not because of the writing style but it doesn’t seem like a book I’d be interested in after your thorough review. The plot or characters didn’t grab me.
    I’m sure there are readers for this type of book, otherwise, it wouldn’t have been published.
    I’m taking your advice and sincerely reading more in Christian fiction but … well, I’ll leave that for another time.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    I’m glad you’re reading more CBA fiction, A. J. If I remember correctly you read and write YA and Fantasy fiction? Unfortunately I can’t help you with that other than for young people’s books, I highly recommend Robert Liparulo’s Dreamhouse Kings Series–not only for, but especially for, boys. other genres? If I know what you like in contemporary adult novels, I can recommend some good ones.
    Robin Parrish is a good writer, but I can’t recommend his books simply because they’re not my thing.

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  5. A. J. Walker Avatar
    A. J. Walker

    Yes, I did take your advice and have been seeking out more Christian fiction, both YA and adult. Most of the adult offerings seem to be thrillers/mystery and they aren’t really resonating with me for some reason. They’re not bad, just sorta forgettable, interesting enough to keep reading but not something I see myself reading again or wanting to add to my personal library.
    I’ve read five of the six Circle books by Dekker but have the 6th one sitting here but am not really motivated to finish the series.
    The first three were good and I read the fourth one in a day but struggled through the fifth. As the fifth one went on, I began to lose interest in where the story was going so I’m not sure I’ll even read the sixth.
    Still searching I guess.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    You don’t have to say what you thought of the following authors if you don’t care to, A. J., just tell me if you’ve read them: Robert Liparulo’s YA series and his adult thrillers; Steven James’ Patrick Bower series (I’ll be reviewing the fourth one in the series: The Bishop in August; short suspense author Brandilyn Collins; Tom Morrisey’s Beck Easton books; Travis Thrasher’s Ghostwriter . . . ?
    What grabs you in a novel? What makes you take notice and flip those pages to the point where you don’t want to take a break when you know you need to?

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  7. A. J. Walker Avatar
    A. J. Walker

    Thanks for the suggestions but I haven’t seen much that any of the authors has written that grabs me.
    I’m reading Christian fiction because I know I should, not because I would naturally.
    I find I have never been interested in mystery/thrillers. I don’t watch crime/cop dramas on tv and have no interest in whodunnit or why. Serial killers? No thanks. Horror? VERY limited capacity. The fact it is by Christian authors doesn’t move me to want to read it anymore than anything else.
    I think what grabs me are stories that have magic in them, where the characters are going somewhere and it’s a ride I want to go on with them. Where the place the book ends leaves the characters and the reader so touched, it’s hard to forget and not because it’s tragic, but because it’s touched the divine.
    I’ve seen it a few times “Bless Me, Ultima” to name one of my favorites. But it’s not a Christian book.
    I’d love to read (and write honestly) books that have the emotional resonance of my favorite films. Maybe I’m grasping at angel feathers but that’s the goal as a reader and as an author.

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  8. Nicole Avatar

    I misunderstood your preferences, A. J., so I listed thriller authors.
    Your goals for reading and writing are noble and should be satisfied. Let me suggest Chris Fabry (Dogwood; June Bug), Redeeming Love by Francine Rivers (it’s not a girl book–both my husband and son loved it); Lisa Samson’s The Passion of Mary-Margaret (also not a girl book); and if you’re at all interested in a “fictional biography” styled novel about a kid who grows up without ambition but gets discovered and becomes a great actor and a reluctant celebrity, I will recommend The Famous One because as many guys have liked it as females.

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