Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

Yes, I think I’ve figured it out. The more I read, the more it takes to impress me. And I think I know why, too. Which is important, don’t you think?

 

Go to any writers’ sites. Any of them. Except for this one of course where I only occasionally refer to ā€œthe rulesā€ with a sarcastic bite to the words and a definite rebellious tone. Posted on those sites by nearly every author, published and not yet so, you will at some point get the list of ā€œRules of Writingā€. The more generous (and wise) of the bunch will add as an afterthought that these ā€œrulesā€ should be used as guidelines. (Again, thank you Captain Barbossa.) The list screeches about using adverbs and adjectives and ing words, compelling you to eliminate as many as possible. Add to that dialogue tags, a no-no unless the minimal ā€œsaidā€ is used and as infrequently as possible. And so on and so forth. They've just been posted yet again at a frequented women’s authors’ blog in case you’ve somehow managed to miss having them pounded and sculpted into engravings on your grey matter.

 

What do these rules have to do with reading a lot and impressing me? When it’s so easy to spot the diligent usage of the rules to write a story, I’m not impressed. Okay? I’m just not. If all of us writers complied with the rules, we would have more and more of what we have now: a copious amount of forgettable fiction.

 

Do you have any idea how difficult it is to make characters unique? Stories which seem different? It’s almost impossible. There’s nothing new under the sun, folks. Nothing. So when a person like me tackles another story, and it’s so much like an episode of a series I’ve just watched on television or a novel I read last month, can I say I’m not impressed? So if the plot is clichĆ© only because I’ve read or watched so many similar stories, how can the book ā€œimpressā€ me? With the writing. That’s all that’s left.

 

Do any of you remember the series Shark starring James Woods that only ran for a short time as far as series-television goes? It had a unique plot with a famous defense lawyer switching sides to become a prosecuting attorney due to the domestic murder committed by one of his clients after ā€œSharkā€ got him acquitted of a domestic violence charge. Besides being perfectly cast, the writing was superb. The dialogue was over-the-top exceptional, the stories complex and interesting. I don’t know why it didn’t last longer, although I must admit to sustain that level of truly good episodes week after week, year after year, would’ve been tough. Very tough.

 

Many of you don’t care about TV. Fine. I do. I love it. I look forward to several shows each year. I hope they sustain their level of past expertise knowing full well how difficult it will be to do exactly that. Dialogue has to sync with character growth. Plots have to create new tensions, feature different players, seek out new approaches to the same old processes. Not easy to do and sustain yet another three to nine months of audience interest.

 

The point? If the writing remains the same old, same old, then the outcome is formulaic, boring, and/or unimpressive. Now. If you’re a new reader to an author or a new viewer to a series, you might not feel the same about the book or show. It’s your first trip in this venue and you’ve yet to be impressed or unimpressed. At first view, you might be intrigued. Eager to follow-up with the next novel or the next segment of the series. You might even think this author or this series on TV is the best ever in your world. And that’s terrific! I think everyone should have an opportunity to enjoy the novels and television shows of their choices.

 

For me, I’ve figured out it takes some interesting writing to impress me. Unfortunately that’s vague. On purpose. I love many different kinds of authors. Their voices, their styles, and their abilities to ignore the ā€œguidelinesā€ to create fascinating fiction impress me. Big time.  

 

Lord, help me to write the way you want me to write. Help me to be true to you above all others. Jesus, you’re all I’m livin’ for . . .

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10 responses to “Okay, I think I’ve got it.”

  1. Normandie Avatar
    Normandie

    Fun, Nicole. And isn’t that what we should be doing? Reading well written and well crafted work so that we tune our ear to hear and recognize the excellent? The only problem is that there are so few that meet those standards.
    I just finished reading a multi-published author’s latest work. And where is that book this morning? In my trash can. Why? Because the publisher allowed so many grammatical errors to slip into print that I spent most of the read time cringing. (It was a fast read.) We’re talking basic grammar here. Not where a comma fits or if we should be using “that” or “which”…but basic case issues — objective versus nominative I don’t want to keep the book. And I don’t want to pass it along so that someone reading it will continue to make that writer’s mistake because, oh, gosh, “It was published, so it has to be right.”
    Just for a quick review in case someone from that publishing house is reading this:
    Nominative case pronouns are I, she, he, we, they, and who. They are used as subjects, predicate nominatives, and appositives when used with a subject or predicate nominative.
    Objective case pronouns are me, her, him, us, them, and whom. They are used as direct objects, indirect objects, objects of the preposition, and appositives when used with one of the objects.
    Sorry for the rant.

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  2. Brenda Avatar
    Brenda

    Too much obsession w/the rules of writing is definitely a deterrant to me as a writer. By that I mean, when it gets harped on over and over again, it drives me away from industry blogs, not to them. But recently I’ve found that paying too much attention to industry blogs is bad for my writing in general–ie. the more I listen to industry talk, the less I desire to write. Not good.
    One of the interesting things about reading Charles Martin recently is that the books struck me as a life ramble, not a story, and it worked.

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  3. Word Lily Avatar

    Yes. The rules are important, but part of why they’re important is so one can knowingly, intentionally, break them. This past month as I’ve been reading so much more than my usual amount, I’ve realized that yes, as I read more (even in pages per day, perhaps, rather than simply total number of books read in my lifetime) I’m more equipped to suss out excellent writing.
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  4. Normandie Avatar
    Normandie

    I don’t have a problem with knowingly, intentionally breaking the rules. I do it all the time. But I do have issues with supposed editors not knowing the basics. If an author writes a good story but doesn’t know all the grammar rules, fine…because the editor ought to know how to fix the obvious ones. That’s the editor’s job. (I could extend responsibility to our education system, which I’ll be happy to do another day.)
    It’s the publisher/editor who has me going right now, not the writer.

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  5. Normandie Avatar
    Normandie

    And perhaps I should mention that this was not a CBA publisher.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    N, you made me smile this morning. I’m sitting here grinning like a goon. Your voice is so refreshing. You editor, you. Great points all. Hey, bring it on, Girl. And, yeah, I think it’s important to mention it wasn’t a CBA publisher since so many like to bash CBA books for being inferior.
    Brenda, excellent point. Just write. I love unique styles. I love writers who know the rules–you can always tell–but break them in grand fashion and it works so well.
    Word Lily, it’s kind of freeing to see it done well, you know? And when we start noticing the quality of craft while we’re enjoying a story? Bonanza.

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  7. Jessica Thomas Avatar

    I appreciate your rebellious tone. šŸ™‚
    By the way, Ecclesiastes is one of my favorite books in the Bible. On the surface, it seems a real bummer, but it is freeing to get to the point where you realize it’s all been done before, so you can stop fretting about the things of this world and start focusing on what really matters.
    One of my creative writing profs in college started the semester saying, “There are no new stories.” It bummed me out at first, but when I finally digested what she said, it allowed me to experiment with my voice. Very freeing.
    I’m definitely of the camp where writing style matters. I’ll forget a book with a so-called great plot, but remember one that has a great voice. I always think back to Anne Tyler’s Breathing Lessons. Not much happens in terms of plot, but the depth of characterization is pretty remarkable. And it won a Pulitzer Prize. So there. :p

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  8. Nicole Avatar

    Jess, always a breath of fresh air. Yes, your voice is distinct, a bit melancholy, tough.
    You know, Jess, I can enjoy light novels. Simple plots. Complex. Unusual. Just give me something to take away. Something real. I don’t need grandiose writing. I need an individual voice and to close the book with some kind of satisfaction.

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  9. Sandi Rog Avatar

    So Nicole, what did you read that sparked this post? LOL
    Coming from an editor’s point of view, I can tell you, I’ve edited a lot of crap. Crap that desperately needed rules. That said, I’m also a huge supporter of breaking those rules, despite the fact that I run a blog teaching how to follow said rules. (Boy, talk about a lot of repetition of ā€œrules.ā€ Maybe I should rework those sentences? But if I do, it just wouldn’t carry the same rhythm, now would it? I think I’ll go with breaking the rule of ā€œno repetition.ā€)
    This is a timely subject for me because I’m thoroughly enjoying breaking numerous rules in my current WIP. I’m breaking them left and right, and I began to doubt and fear the risks I was taking—because they’re quite high. The risks involve plot structure. I’m doing everything I tell beginning (emphasize ā€œbeginningā€ because I believe when you’ve mastered the rules you can break them) writers they shouldn’t do. But . . . my story is ten times better because of it. I’m loving every minute of it. And every time I do it, I almost want to jab my finger in the air and shout, ā€œSo there!ā€
    Then the fear creeps in. I can see my fellow writing pals shaking their heads and wagging their fingers. That’s when I ask, ā€œSandi, what are you doing? Are you nuts?ā€ I run to my most honest friends (I have three who will tell me if what I’m doing is lousy—one of them is my husband, e-hem. Amazing he’s still alive, but that’s why I married him). I’ve shared my work with them, asking them if I’ve gone ā€œastray.ā€ After reading my work, ALL three used the word, ā€œbeautiful.ā€ And one of these honest friends is a fellow editor! So, I’m sticking to my streak of rule-breaking. šŸ™‚ It’s funny that I’m reading about this now because just today I approached friend number-three for her honest opinion of my story (she’s also a critique partner, so she knows how to slash things up really good). SIGH I gotta stop doubting myself. Still, it gave me the boost I needed to keep going! Yes, I’m pathetic. šŸ™‚
    Thanks for this post, Nicole. Speaking of honest friends, I love your honesty, sis.

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  10. Nicole Avatar

    Thank you, Sandi. You’re such a joy to “listen” to. And I believe in you. I’m sure your WIP is beautiful and is an example of how lovely and freeing a story can be with creative expression above and beyond the rules. Isn’t it all about creativity once the craft is learned? The energy and imagination of writers is boundless and should be exercised to the fullest. You go, Girl!
    (And I feel pathetic at least half the time. I’m a voice floating in the web-o-sphere, disconnected and untethered to any means of respect.)

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