Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

As a writer, I experience a certain hesitancy with every new novel I open. As an author, I’m both apprehensive and anticipatory of experiencing the wow factor. Truth be told, every once in awhile I smile at those moments in my own storytelling when the language and the situation merge with stellar results. Now who knows if I’m the only one who feels that way about a certain sentence, passage, or dialogue exchange, but when it happens, it’s WOW! And I know who gets the credit for it. Not me.

 

Oh go ahead and roll your eyes, you skeptics. You think because you’ve learned your craft and your muse is workin’ it, that little sentence or sketch or clever repartee appeared from your nimble mind, an expression of your innate and learned intelligence. Well . . . I can’t claim that. I know it comes directly from the Holy Spirit to me because I’m not that clever or smart enough to be responsible for something moving and important in the world of writing books.

 

So what is “That WOW! Thing”? Who knows? Seriously. What makes me stop and whisper wow might get passed by in your reading. However, there are always a handful of writers who get that wow thing goin’ on from a diverse group of readers/audiences.

 

Yesterday’s post alluded to the difficulties in impressing other writers. I find it fascinating that so many accomplished authors and other professionals in the Christian publishing industry read extensively in the general market simply because they admire the writing. They find that wow thing in most books with little or no redemptive stories—not saying here that all general market novels don’t contain redemptive themes but many of them certainly do not. The general market does present some magnificent writers but don’t fool yourself into thinking that’s all they produce. Not true. And if you used the proportionate production of novels in the general market to the number of novels in the CBA, you’d probably find the percentage of well-written to not-so-much close to the same.

 

You’d also find that some of the bestsellers in the general market (i.e. Brown’s Code books and Meyer’s Twilight series) have managed to sustain the reputations of their authors being “hacks”. I can’t say whether or not this is true. None of their writings interest me. Their success, however, in spite of the accusations, accentuates that people just want a “good” story. What transpires as a “good” story always sets up another animated argument—er, discussion.

 

That wow thing means something occurs outside the “norm” of reading—or writing—stories. The way the story is told, the words used to tell it, the twists, the opening, the events, or the conclusion—something touches the reader and brings their sense of involvement to a new level. Whether it’s admiration, identification, involvement, affinity, or all of the aforementioned factors, the author manages to create a sense of having experienced something truly different and something remarkably special from reading the words on the pages.

 

Let’s be honest. As writers, most of us want to present our readers with that wow thing. We’re wise enough to know it’s very hard to do. But because we value it in our reading experience, we labor to produce it, sensing without God’s intervention, the genuine wow factor is elusive—and divine.

 

At least I do.

 

Father, please incorporate the divine into my writing. Nothing could be better than your touch. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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6 responses to “That WOW! Thing . . .”

  1. Brenda Avatar
    Brenda

    That elusive wow thing. So hard to come by both in reading and writing. As a writer, generally speaking, I know the wow factor is most likely to come from those periods of your writing session where you are so in the moment that you don’t even notice the passage of time–the words are just flowing and it’s like your brain isn’t even part of the process–somehow ideas are just on auto-pilot, flowing from your fingers onto the keyboard and onto the screen. And then, only when you go back later and read you’re thinking…WOW.
    Sadly, at least in my writing, that accounts for a very small percentage of my butt-in-chair writing time.
    I have often wondered what percentage of their own novel authors figure to be “WOW” and what percentage they ascribe to be “average”. For me, it feels like it’s 90% average and 10% wow.
    But then we are our own harshest critics.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    Yes we are, Brenda, but WOW! isn’t easy to come by. And I think you’re right about those moments when everything works. Words come, scenes, dialogue, everything flows–the story forms in spite of us.
    (Brenda, there’s a comment back on yesterday’s post written by Sandi Rog [author and editor] directed to you. Stop back by and take a look.)

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  3. Sandi Rog Avatar

    I wrote a nice long comment to this, but then my stupid computer decided to shut down to “install updates,” and I lost everything! I’ll try to come back to this later, but I’m gonna be gone all day long. SIGH I should have left 15 minutes ago to be honest.
    It’s a great post, Nicole. As usual!
    Hugs!

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  4. Sandi Rog Avatar

    Okay, I’m really ticked off. I just finished writing my post for the second time, and my computer SHUT DOWN again because the stinkin’ battery died! I lost the last part of what I wrote, despite working in a Word document this time. Unbelievable! I don’t believe I’m writing anything “profound” that Satan would try to keep me from posting. I mean, really!
    So, here’s what I wrote, and I’ll try to remember what I had in the end and retype it. Ugh.

    What I write now will in no way measure up to the words I put down on the page the first time. But here we go anyway. (I wrote this opener because of the FIRST post I lost, not because of this one. shaking head)
    I know there are writers who believe God gives them their stories. I simply can’t bring myself to say that. It makes me feel pompous. I’m not saying writers who’ve received their stories from God are pompous. Maybe they are, maybe they aren’t. Who am I to say God didn’t give them their stories. But as for me, I can’t say that. I just can’t. I mean, who am I? Why would God, the Almighty Creator, pick little-ole-me out to entrust with a story meant to glorify Him?
    I CAN say that I PRAY over what I write. I pray over every line, paragraph, page and chapter. I pray over the whole book and ask God if I’ve put anything in there that’s displeasing to Him, will He please show me where and how to fix it before it’s too late. I pray that I will glorify Him. So far, He’s helped me out quite a bit. Not through a still small voice or by any supernatural means. Usually, His help comes through a friend, a critique partner, a song, a sermon, or an experience, etc. The different forms of help are limitless really. And honestly, all these little “helps” keep me from getting a big head. 🙂
    In those moments when something WOW pops into my mind before I put it on the page, or as I put it on the page, I always thank God because I know it came from Him. When I get stuck in a scene or a plot point, He always helps me. And He has amazing ways of giving me ideas. Like I said, His forms of help are limitless.
    ***Now if only He would help me get this comment posted!
    I originally had something much more “profound” than this. I had more in the above paragraph about those “wow” moments, but I’m done. In fact, I ended on a prayer, and the whole prayer is lost. It’s hard to rewrite a prayer that came from the heart to begin with. God read it, and that’s all that matters.
    I’ll just end with this: God is my Helper. He is my Guide. He is my ALL. And the only reason I’m a good writer at all is only because of HIM.

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  5. Sandi Rog Avatar

    I would just like to celebrate the fact that I finally succeeded in posting my comment. “Thank you, ladies and gentlemen. Thank you!” Taking my bow, nice and low and formal. “Thank you.”
    Sandi Rog is now exiting the scene with a kiss to her fans and a gentle wave as she glides to the curtain and to everyone’s relief, disappears. lol

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    “Why would God, the Almighty Creator, pick little-ole-me out to entrust with a story meant to glorify Him?” Because you are his precious workmanship, Sandi. His loved one. His concern.
    “In those moments when something WOW pops into my mind before I put it on the page, or as I put it on the page, I always thank God because I know it came from Him. When I get stuck in a scene or a plot point, He always helps me. And He has amazing ways of giving me ideas. Like I said, His forms of help are limitless.” Precisely what I’m talkin’ about.
    . . .
    Applause!

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