Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

How do you define style? In my writing I use a fair amount of sentence fragments. Less commas than grammatically correct—if you stick to what you learned in English, those commas can drag a story along. I love similes if done well. And italics don’t bother me at all.

 

Some cinematographers use panoramic shots, taking advantage of magnificent scenery. Think the newest version of “Pride and Prejudice” (with Keira Knightley). Gorgeous. Others use choppy shots infused with monochrome or black and white. Some use different colors of filters to alter mood or create tension.

 

Style speaks as much about the creator of a piece as the piece itself. What is the author or director or painter or photographer saying with his/her expressions, colors, words, actions?

 

I want to create a mental movie for my readers, to get them inside the skins and heads of my characters. My stories deal with the emotions and spiritual realities of people living their lives. Some are outstanding, some are very ordinary. Some undesirable, others you want to have as friends or lovers. Dialogue must be real.

 

Style for me is the way the story is told. What does it mean for you, and how do you describe your writing style?

 

 

Lord, you are the Creator. You share it, you author it, you contain all beauty and imagination—all that is good. Help me to honor you with what you’ve given me. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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2 responses to “In style . . .”

  1. Brenda Avatar
    Brenda

    It took me a long time to respond to this one because it’s the kind of question that makes my head hurt. 😎 I’m not sure if, having only one novel under my belt, I’m qualified to say what my style is.
    But when I think of my writing I think in terms of simplistic language–no $10 words. Dense paragraphs (I’m going to have to learn to vary this to better effect in the next manuscript). Surprisingly spare on description (surprising because my favorite books excel at description).
    Speaking of style, I’m listening to Tolstoy’s War and Peace on audio–have never read the book. His style seems so simplistic that its complex. In this modern age, we poo-poo telling of emotion but he does it often and with great effect.
    It will be interesting to see how my style evolves with the next manuscript.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    Well, I’m glad you went through the pain because you gave some great thoughts here, Brenda. 😉
    First of all, your style will evolve as you write more novels–only because you’ll fine tune it according to the story you invent. I think it’s interesting how you evaluate your style, and I’m willing to bet it’s an accurate analysis. I, too, enjoy good description and prefer it to sparse writing, but good writing is good writing regardless of the style, and I’m sure yours fits your story.
    And I’m convinced I’m a throwback to those older writers. Emotion is critical to involving the reader beyond a surface investment.

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