Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

. . . for the sake of story? If you’re writing thrillers, mysteries, or suspense novels, you can get away with murder. Literally. But murder doesn’t often fit into the romance genre. Or women’s fiction. Doesn’t mean it can’t—especially in chick lit—just means it’s unlikely. It would have to be done very well to ring true and not morph the story into romantic suspense.

 

I think for an ordinary blue collar type girl—now a mature, in the sense of age anyway, woman—I’ve lived an exciting life. I chased a British movie star to Great Britain and also toured most of Europe shortly after my 20th birthday. For someone who’d never been more than two states away in either direction and always accompanied by my parents, a trip with a friend to the distant shores was indeed quite an adventure. When I returned, I realized just how much a university education was not in my repertoire, and I joined the vagabond life of horse racing. Finally a life with horses—a dream come true.

 

But in between gala events in my lifetime, there is much ordinary living. And isn’t that the case for most of us?

 

So. If we follow the instructions of writing a breakout novel, we must create tension on every page—or conflict, conflict, conflict. Huh. Is that how you want to live your life? In a perpetual state of angst?

 

Now high school romances present lots of conflicts, but how about the process of discovering each other as adults? Just how much tension is reality? UST (unresolved sexual tension) will no doubt be apparent if there’s any testosterone/estrogen anxiety. But what about mayhem? Isn’t that just a bit much for a romance novel?

 

How many times have you read the back cover copy of a novel and immediately figured out the process of the characters? Admittedly, there are tried and true formulas for certain genres, but when the conflicts and resolutions are predictable before the cover is opened, what’s the point? Well, evidently, the point for many readers is traipsing through the angst of that conflict just because . . .

 

Life is often ordinary. It doesn’t need to be falsified to make it interesting or meaningful. It would seem the true writer could take great pleasure in bringing “real” to life on the pages of story . . .

 

 

Lord, you are the only “extraordinary” I know. That you would dwell in me is beyond my comprehension, but I’m so grateful. So very thankful. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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7 responses to “Falsifying life . . .”

  1. Brenda Jackson Avatar

    I may not WANT my life to be a perpetual state of angst, but it often is. Not because of murder (though there are some people it has crossed my mind to strangle) but with many other things in life.
    You bring this topic up at an interesting time. Though in general I write historical, I am very, very disturbed by the state of healthcare, specifically in my experience, how hospitals are run. And I wonder every day if there isn’t a way to shed light on the huge nature of these problems through fiction–without making it about some physician murder mystery, etc.
    But not only is it a problem of “how do you portray ordinary lives” but the fact that you have to be careful with “message” fiction.
    Most people’s real lives are too ordinary for fiction, but I don’t believe you need either romance OR murder to make a good story. But it’s not easy.
    I once went to Fiction Finder to pull up a list of contemp fiction to see if there were any stories that grabbed me. All the main characters (women naturally) were CIA agents, doctors, what have you. Not one ordinary secretary or operator or phlebotomist in the bunch.
    Is that because stories about characters like this just won’t work or is it that writers just don’t try? I don’t know.

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  2. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    I do believe there needs to be conflict to maintain interest in a story. What is the protag trying to achieve? And what is preventing them from achieving it? It’s those subconscious questions that encourage me to read on. And, no, murder doesn’t have to be part of the equation. 🙂
    Brenda – I’ve noticed the same thing with fiction protagonists. They all have these “glory” jobs. Of course, I need to do something different. Some of my female protags? A stay-at-home mom, a debt collector, and an office manager. Not glamourous, but they do have a story to tell.

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  3. Nicole Avatar

    Thanks for your comments, Ladies. It’s an interesting conundrum. Granted if you make message your focal point without good drama, the story suffers.
    I think in meaningful stories where there’s not huge external conflict (i.e. with thrillers, etc.) most of the conflict is internal, and that can be trickier to do well. Don’t I know . . .

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  4. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    I do think centering a story around internal conflict is more difficult, but when well done, I’d much rather read that over action/suspense. As you said, the trick is doing it well.

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  5. Nicole Avatar

    I don’t think I have a preference when reading, but I do want either well done. It’s like when Vince Flynn attempted to insert romance into his novels: he’s no good at it. Except for the startling and beautiful climactic scene in Consent to Kill which made me cry and blew me away in its emotional impact. I’d love to partner with him in doing some romance writing for Mitch. I already know the character who’d be perfect for him. And I can make it sizzle. 😉

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  6. Kate {The Parchment Girl} Avatar

    I think the best books are realistic about life. A few days ago I read The Daughter’s Walk by Jane Kirkpatrick, which is basically a fictionalized account of an actual event, and it was incredibly fascinating. Just goes to show you that real life is oftentimes more exciting and gripping than anything writers can dream up on their own.

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  7. Nicole Avatar

    Thanks so much for stopping by, Kate. And “stranger than fiction” often applies, huh? Yes, sometimes when we writers capture the reality of person, place, or thing, we get it just right.

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