Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

Writers sometimes forget it isn’t all about the writing. Of course it is to us when we’re working on a piece, but for many readers the writing is a sideshow to the main event of a novel.

 

For writers, it takes a rare and sterling story to cast aside what some view as inferior, mediocre, or merely passable writing. It’s the nature of the beast to cast aspersions on others’ writing, making mental notes of no-nos according to the favorite trends.

 

Nearly all the current “rules of writing” would erase “the classics” from publication. Yet patriots of these rules apply the mantra to just about everything they read while readers fail to notice the egregious “errors” and look dumbfounded if someone tries to explain to them why a book doesn’t work—because, hey, the readers liked the story so what else matters?

 

It’s much harder for writers and their editors to break outside the jail of whatever has been decided to be “poor” uses of technique, style, and the almost reverent use and application of the word “craft”. The big time, feverish defense of “good” writing inevitably produces major discussions involving snobbish arguments and/or reasonable breakdowns of what defines “good”. And, yes, there is a standard for both good and bad writing, but don’t ask readers what that standard might be because the qualifiers which apply to writers who are readers and for those who are just plain readers can differ as definitively as summer and winter.

 

Many writers cannot give up their day jobs. Even published writers realize how difficult it can be to reach readers with their stories. Finding a big enough and faithful audience for their work keeps them ever-pursuing, never relaxing. Juggling the trials of job, family, and writing/marketing create immense challenges especially when sales rise and dip. Yet a writer perseveres because it’s more than a hobby, it’s a compulsion or a calling.

 

I find it fascinating how many writers use the royalty method of publication to personally validate “good” writing and then proceed to tear down other authors who’ve jumped through all the grueling hoops to achieve it.

 

Writers are well aware that the popularity of a novel does not guarantee a high standard of writing. However, two things it does indicate are the publisher deemed it worthy of producing because they figured it would sell, and readers dug the story. The term “hack” has been applied to many best-selling novelists who probably chuckle about it all the way to their respective banks.

 

Authors presumably write for readers, not necessarily for other writers. Writers (and editors) are by far the harshest critics of themselves and others in their field. We tend to operate in tribes—or packs—supporting those who write similar prose to ours or who we grudgingly view as exceeding us. And then some of us attack those who don’t fit what we think writing should be. Some lord their standards over others, insisting that excellence is the key and goal—or should be—of every writer. They can identify precisely what they consider the optimum defining gold standard, the virtues of the craft, citing examples of their favorite wordsmiths or listing the perfect methods for achieving literary prowess. And it all has merit, although its value might be lost on readers.

 

Readers want a good story and many of them could care less how it’s told. No matter how much or how little the author has invested in the book, if the story resonates with the reader, the words used to tell it hardly matter.

 

Craftsmen (and women) argue that readers don’t like certain ill-written books because of the poor techniques used, but, really, most readers—or the average readers—will tell you why they didn’t like a story, and it will have nothing to do with how it’s written.

 

Don’t get me wrong here. If you’re a writer, give it your best. However you learn—whether it’s by reading and absorbing or studying and applying—keep on doing it. Don’t allow your writing to become stale and unimaginative—fight those inclinations to land in a rut. Don’t coast. Let others be their own judges.

 

As writers and readers, we certainly have the right, maybe even the obligation in certain instances, to share our observations and opinions of others’ works. It’s important to remember that many parts of writing, stripped down from all the high-falutin’ critiques, opinions, praises, and assaults, are merely a matter of taste. Some highbrow and some lowbrow. Some with intelligent assessment and some with gut-feeling. Some with a teacher’s mentality and some with a student’s appreciation. As writers or readers, we do not walk the same literary paths, but we all have the option to travel our favorites.

 

Assessing the writing of a story can be a rigorous exercise often lost on readers. There’s a certain beauty in just being a reader: story always trumps writing. It is what it is. And there’s freedom in that . . . for some of us.

 

 

Father, you’re the designer. You display your love of differences in creation, your flair for the unique and the sameness. You’re mysterious yet open. You appreciate beyond our capabilities. Help me to be the one you designed me to be. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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8 responses to “When story trumps writing . . .”

  1. Brenda Jackson Avatar

    If there are any negatives to being a writer, it is the fact that we lose the ability to simply be a reader. I cannot read anything without analyzing it.
    On the other hand, while I can’t discount subjectivity, the better a person’s book, the more it shuts down my analyzer. One of the greatest joys to me is finding a book that is so very good my analyzer does shut down and I simply become a reader. I don’t come across very many books that do that for me but it does happen on occasion. When it does, it makes a story and the writing feel like magic. 😎

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    I’ve been able to tone down my writer-critic persona when reading. The main reason for that is I don’t think the current “rules” really define good writing for me. I know why I don’t like stories and can usually translate that for reviews, but I’m always aware that my opinion of a novel is just that: my opinion. I’ve read novels which were fairly faultless according to today’s writing trends, but the stories were unappealing, formulaic, and predictable.

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  3. Brenda Jackson Avatar

    Yeah–I don’t think it is rules that snag me when reading–UNLESS the story itself also is not captivating. It sort of has a magnifying effect then. If the story is a yawner I’m going to notice what seem to be so-called ‘rule’ flaws more.
    And the truth is, it is much easier to critique technical things than story things. Last night I read a short story (not professionally published) that had me in tears within the first page. But if I were to dissect the words and sentences, I’m not sure I could tell you why that story punched me in the gut. Why are some characters like long lost friends and some never come up off the page? That’s tough to assess.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    I’m no “analyzer” of writing because for me it takes away from the experience. I have to like the characters for the novel to matter to me. If I don’t like them within a certain amount of time into the story, forget it. Some writers only go skin deep with characters and storylines.
    If the writing is noticeably “bad” for my experience, it will definitely make the reading difficult. I think the deciding factor for my overall opinion was realizing that even though I could diagram why the writing seemed poor to me, there were other readers and writers who loved the book and didn’t see what I did.

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  5. Jill Avatar

    I have a serious problem w/ your assessment. You lump all readers into one black and white stereotype. Readers aren’t a collective, and I’m frankly tired of hearing writers say that they are. “Readers want xyz, not abc.” How do you know that all readers want nothing more than a good story? Are you assuming that readers aren’t intelligent, and therefore aren’t capable of discerning craft and analyzing word usage and sentence structures? This is like saying that all art appreciators only want pretty pictures and are incapable of knowing anything about contrast, pigment, style, or composition. I wish you would give your readers a little more credit.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    Jill, I understand your consternation, but if you knew more of my position on readers, mainly “the average reader(s)”, you’d know what/who I’m referring to in this post. There is a major difference between readers and writers who are readers. There is a major difference between “average readers” and readers who target literary fiction in all its forms. The average reader isn’t lacking intelligence, nor are the literary readers necessarily expounding intelligence. The average readers who provide much of the audience for pulp fiction, category romance, and/or some of the bestsellers really don’t care how the stories are written. It’s not their gig to dissect what they read. They just want to read a good story. It’s not an insult to be an average reader just as it’s not an esteem issue to prefer a higher level of prose. At least it isn’t for me.
    Books that get published draw certain audiences. Writers/authors create their fiction to satisfy their needs to tell/construct stories and meet their personal standards for what they consider good writing. There are probably some writers out there who couldn’t care less who values their writing because they know it isn’t classy, or literary, or praiseworthy, but if those writers are selling books, that’s their justification.
    Readers come in all kinds. As I noted, their tastes and assessments of fiction register at all levels. I think I made the distinction in this post but apparently you do not.

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  7. TIm George Avatar

    You know Nicole, wouldn’t you just love to have average readers see the blogathon going on right now about this subject! I was all set to post something on my site to further air my thoughts on the matter but you’ve done just fine. Already, others are feeling like martyrs for a valiant cause and I am just “Mr. George” who shares a broad brush with dear simple Nicole.
    [All inside comments that only a few will understand so no harm or foul.]
    Instead, no controversy for me. Tomorrow I am going to run the first in a series on both of my sites called “The Author’s Heart.” No controversial statements. No invitation to contention. Just Mike Dellosso and me talking about the harder part of writing – unveiling one’s own soul for the world to see. I wonder how many will be as interested in that?
    Great post. Great, great post.

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  8. Nicole Avatar

    Thanks, Tim. You know it means a lot.

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