Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

How do you pursue the quest for bettering your writing? What inspires you to search for the words, the expressions, the scenery, the action, the depth in your characters that rivals real life? How? What methodology? Why?

 

Of course if you recognize your work as drivel, you desire to improve. If you assess your work as passable, you want to get it better. But what if you truly like your work? And don’t authors have to like their work in the end? I mean, come on. Why work for days, weeks, months, sometimes years to submit a novel you think is worthless?

 

This isn’t to say we writers don’t doubt we can type a single worthwhile word when we stumble over them, not “feeling” them, not knowing where the heck this story intends to go as it stops dead. We shudder. We ache. We cry. We pray. We wonder. We fear. We worry. We threaten to quit. We give up momentarily. We sigh. We wait. We start again.

 

When do we conclude this is the best we can do? Never? Do we go on and on with our own “red pen” attacks and fuss and pick at the words as if they’re old grapes? What tells us it’s time to stop? Just stop already. Let someone else pick it apart. Or stuff it in a drawer, hide it in a file, stick it in a box and shove it under the guest bed or up in the attic.

 

What makes you better?

 

 

Father, I repeat this over and over again because of its incredible truth: apart from you I can do nothing. Only you can inspire more, better. Thank you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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7 responses to “The quest for better . . .”

  1. Jessica Thomas Avatar

    Time. As much as I’d like to rush it. Martyred is so much better now than when I first sent it to publishers. I thought it was “ready” then, but it wasn’t at all. Through the years, picking it back up now and then, I’ve used life experiences to strengthen it.
    I think alot of what might be considered “bad” fiction, is bad because it was rushed. Writers and publishers hurrying to try and make a dime. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with that, necessarily, but I think most classics are written over years, not months. The draft needs to age, like wine.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    Time heals. For sure. Fresh eyes, as they say. And always the wisdom of life. Good thoughts, Jess.

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  3. Brenda Jackson Avatar

    Jessica, I wrestle with that rush factor. I’ve only written one novel so far & it took me 6 years. People in my writing circle push me to “submit! submit! submit!”
    While I have learned it was a mistake for me not to be working on OTHER manuscripts during that period instead of obsessively working and reworking that one, by the same token, I don’t think that means I should rush to submit. I may not qualify as an experienced writer, but still, even being hard on myself, I know when something is still lacking from my manuscript.
    That said, I know that all the writing courses, blog articles, or anything else won’t help me. The only way I can take the next step is by producing more manuscripts.

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  4. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    I’m with Jessica. Time is a big factor to me. I don’t think a great work can be rushed. Also, I know that when I set a work aside, work on something else for a period, then come back to it, it’s much easier to see where the work needs improvement.

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  5. Nicole Avatar

    Brenda, you’ve done the right thing by going over your ms. seeking its best. Now put it away and start your next one. Then go back, tweak it if necessary, and submit. You need the new one to cement your voice and style and/or to experiment.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    Brenda A., couldn’t agree more.

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  7. Jessica Thomas Avatar

    Brenda J., I sort of did the same thing, only I obsessed for over 10 years. 🙂 Of course, during that time I was tinkering with other things, even a second manuscript, but mostly, I couldn’t abandon ms #1. The first one taught me what NOT to do, and also what works, it’s the one that taught me how to write a novel. Now, I think I can write more quickly, but even so, I can’t imagine completing more than 1 every two years.
    I actually did submit ms #1 years ago. Thankfully it was universally rejected! Of course, I was internally pounding my fist at God, but of course, he always knows what he’s doing.

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