Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

                                
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Characters almost unanimously matter more – or as much as – the plot in storytelling. Some readers are far more sensitive to characters than others, but most readers will admit how the characters in a story are written/portrayed matter in how much a story is enjoyed.

Some prefer odd, quirky, off-center characters and stories. Others prefer high-action heroes. Some like "sensitive", near perfect, gorgeous, wealthy, tender, or fragile. Others like rough, crass, or hard-edged characters. Regardless of what a reader enjoys, if enough readers don't invest their attention and emotion into your characters, chances are their interest in your story won't entice them to continue with your work. Some won't finish your novel. Others will grudgingly read the story if engaged in the plot but won't maintain the same investment and interest if they don't like the characters you've created. 

One of my all-time favorite female characters is Sibella Giorello's Raleigh Harmon. She's an FBI agent who takes chances and at times plays outside the legal lines of her job, landing her in a heap of trouble but accomplishing the "necessary" in the process. She labors over her decisions in every area of her life, proves emotionally vulnerable to loneliness and stress over the psychological loss of her mother, what she believes was the murder of her beloved father, and the estrangement from her cold and distant sister. She loves God but often feels like a disappointment to Him and everyone else in her life. She's attracted to another agent but will not succumb to his "charms" or her feelings for him. She's complex, tender, tough, and humble. And I love to read the stories centered on her cases, her conflicts, and her sensitivities. In every novel from the first (seen below) to the latest (The Stars Shine Bright), more layers show up in her makeup. Sibella does a magnificent job of making Raleigh intriguing and desirable as a character.

                          
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Characters run the show. If they fail to be interesting, the "show" might close early and never get an encore.

 

Father, please continue to help each one of us who depend on you for every word we write. Apart from you, none of us could write a thing. Give us what we need to serve you the way you desire. Please. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

 

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3 responses to “Encore?”

  1. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    Ditto what you said about Raleigh Harmon. I love that she’s such a unique and multi-faceted heroine. She certainly doesn’t fit any cookie-cutter mold.

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  2. BK Jackson Avatar

    Great characters are critical. I often argue with myself about this though. I can be swayed a LOT by story. I discard so many stories because they just don’t reach for anything I’m interested in. So when I do find a story that actually seems enticing enough to read, part of me says “I don’t care if it’s a robot, at least I finally found an interesting story!”
    But then when I read and finish the book, I am reminded (again) that indeed, great characters were critical to making a great story. When I remember my most favorite stories over the years, the ones that I’ll read again and again, I do remember what it is about the plot I loved. But the characters are right there along side in my memory.

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  3. Nicole Avatar

    Brenda, I enjoyed The Tenth Crusader which is sci-fi by Kirk Outerbridge, and the cyborg hero had just enough charisma to keep me interested but angered me more than he pleased me in this sequel. The story was intriguing but almost too complex and ambitious. However, in this case the story ruled because the hero had female issues and for all his toughness he was a wuss around his detestable wife. All that to say, if he’d been any more wussy, I might not’ve been able to tolerate the story. Story took an edge over the characters in this case, but mostly for me I gotta like the characters even more than the story.
    Yeah, Bren, we agree on Raleigh. Awesome character.

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