Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

 

Authors do all kinds of writing calesthenics creating characters. Some use cropped pictures from magazines to zero in on their target creation. Some prepare detailed notebooks of everything they intend their character to be. Others design elaborate story-boards to track their characters. And still others hear their character's voice and picture him/her in their mind's eye while putting words on the page to portray them.

Two of my favorite older television series had strong male protagonists leading the way to successful runs for both programs. Magnum P. I., starring the dashing and talented Tom Selleck, began with the former Navy man enjoying the luxury of Robin Masters' estate in Hawaii, charged with maintaining security much to the displeasure of the estate manager Higgins (John Hillerman) and his two Dobermans, Zeus and Apollo. Thomas Magnum appears to be a handsome playboy with little to do but jet around in the red Ferrari, making trips to see his buddies, one of which runs a local bar and restaurant and the other who operates a helicopter service.

                       
Magnum

Over the course of many seasons, Magnum's development and his and Higgins' relationship illustrate the depth of these two characters through tragedy, trauma, hilarity, and humanity. Tested and tried through all kinds of situations, the outstanding writing in the series demonstrated the desire to make these characters appealing with just enough commonality in their emotional makeup and basic humanity to allow the audience to identify with them in spite of their extraordinary and uncommon circumstances.

By using the military JAG corps as its focal location and basis for plots, once again we have a handsome "hero" in Commander Harmon Rabb (David James Elliot) but with the addition in the second season of the tough but attractive marine Major Sarah "Mac" MacKenzie (Catherine Bell). The sparks, friction, and competition between these two develops over the course of the series revealing the heartbreak in each of their pasts, what spurs their fierceness as attorneys, and how they stumble through their relationships. Once again the writing in this series keeps the viewer tuning in to watch the drama between these two lead actors as well as the other contributing characters in the show.

                               
JAG

Both of these series lasted for several years with ongoing growth in the characters, strong protagonists with just enough fallibility to draw us to them, to help us identify with them, and to hope for their successes however that might be defined for them. Those of us who enjoyed these series hated to see them conclude even though we recognized they'd run their courses, and it was probably time for "The End" to be scrawled across the screen.

In our novels we must find the depth in characters which draw readers to them. Whether we nail the reader in the beginning chapter with mighty revelations about certain characters or if we take our time to steadily and methodically reveal important facets of their characters, we need to make sure the people on the page aren't stick figures going through the formulaic and predictable motions we so often see in fiction. It's never easy to make them unique, but it's always necessary to make them appealing.   

 

Father, you gift, you give, you forgive, you direct, you guide all who choose to follow you. You bless. You are Love. We're desperate for you in all we do. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.         

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4 responses to “Dissecting Characters”

  1. BK Jackson Avatar

    Using TV for a comparison brings up something else too. For whatever reason, I’ve never been much of a movie watcher–at least not nearly so as compared to many others who can name tons of films they’ve seen.
    Up until the last 15-20 years, I’ve spent a lifetime watching series television. The good news is, that naturally deepends my desire to write thorough, realistic characters. The bad news is, as long as it FEELS to write a novel, you really can’t smoosh 8 years of character growth into one novel (well technically I suppose you could given the right timeline).
    I’m sure that’s why I tend to be drawn to series fiction and not standalones.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    Interesting points, Brenda.
    I think it’s reasonable to develop characters in novels over a series as does the television medium, but I also think it’s possible to include much of what series TV does in increments in one solid novel. Maybe the time frame and circumstances are concentrated, but reactions, revelation via bits of backstory, and dialogue can reveal the hearts and minds of characters in a stand alone.
    I also enjoy good series novels but not when the author/publisher decides to use each one, especially the first one, to set up the next in order to keep the reader buying their books.

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  3. Robert Liparulo Avatar

    Great analysis, Nicole. WHile. as a reader, I prefer standalone stories, as a writer I like series because of the opportunity to delve deeper into characters I’ve spend a lot of time with and have come to love. As a writer, it’s challenging, but also rewarding—I hope to the reader as well. When we fall in love with someone, or become fascinated by them, who wants to walk away?

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    Robert, many of today’s publishers demand restrictive word counts (recalling a conversation we once had on this topic) which can make the way for series fiction and the advanced development of characters.
    I love good standalones, but sometimes those restrictive word counts shut down the nitty-gritty of good character development and force us to extrapolate what we want them to be from what we’re reading.
    Good series work for me as well, but as I said, if each novel is a set-up for the next, I probably won’t read past the first one. I don’t like being manipulated.
    And I toatlly agree: who wants to walk away from a dynamite character (i.e. Mitch Rapp)? As a writer, I like standalones, but it’s definitely hard to say farewell at the end. I’ve only written a couple novels in my arsenal that I think could support at least a sequel.
    Appreciate you stopping by, Robert. Hope you’re well.

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