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There are a multitude of rules concerning backstory in novels. How much to include, when to insert it, why it needs – or doesn't need - to be there, and of course what not to do with backstory. You know how I feel about rules, but let me attempt to be reasonable about this element of writing stories.

First of all, rules are guidelines for those writers who appreciate them, who actually need them, and who want to pass all the "tests" which will lead them to a publishing contract while hoping to improve their skills. Rules are borne from the theory that setting up general requirements to write well will in fact produce better writers and stories. Most professionals will admit – when pressed – that rule-breaking can be done effectively by good writers without those rules being missed.

And that's the defining factor. Good writers can do anything and make it interesting. They can shove backstory in where it supposedly doesn't belong and the reader doesn't even notice. They can fill page after page with backstory, but they manage to set it up so well and keep it uniquely enticing so that the reader is carried back into the past of a character or circumstance without objection.

Not everyone can do it. Thus the rules.

Backstory doesn't bother me. Neither do prologues. Or adverbs. Or a multitude of other items considered to be no-nos. Just do them well. That's the quantifying and not-so-simple solution we writers strive to do.

 

Father, thank you for words, even though they hide from us at times, feel completely inadequate for our true expressions at others. You are the supplier and provider of all we need. Thank you for your generosity to us and for imparting inspiration for what you have for us to do. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

  

 

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4 responses to “Backstory?”

  1. BK Jackson (@BKJacksonAZ) Avatar

    I’ve seen back story work, and I’ve seen it flop. Usually it flops when the author is sounding their characters out on the page, sifting through things that already should’ve been sifted before they actually took to the writing of the actual story. The backstory can drone on and on. I’m guilty of this myself at times. I figure, if I’m so interested in every little detail of my characters, surely everyone else must be as enthralled!
    But then real life smacks you in the face. 😎 And you learn the reader really wishes you would just get on with the story.
    If the back story is active it’s easier to digest. But if it’s just a recitation of mundane events, you become tired quickly. So I have found that usually, though not necessarily always, shorter snips are better.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    You make some good points, Brenda. And you clarified for me why I don’t care for the novels which go back and forth between historical years and contemporary events bringing/establishing a connection to the present. I just realized it’s another way of loading up the backstory which has become an acceptable trend for some authors (Susan Meissner comes to mind). I love Susan’s writing, but I haven’t enjoyed this approach and have only read a couple of her novels since she started writing this way. Not criticizing because it’s a clever maneuver to connect the past with the present, but it’s not a preference for me. The recent past is what works for me.

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  3. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    Interesting you mention Susan Meissner. I’m reading her new release, A Fall of Marigolds, right now. I guess I’ve had the same reaction as you regarding split-time period stories. While I love her writing, I don’t like going back ‘n forth. Just keep the current story going, and I’ll enjoy the book much more.
    Also, another book I read recently overdid the backstory. She used flashback dumps. Now, I don’t mind a well-placed, brief flashback, but these went on for pages, and I found myself skipping ahead to the main storyline. It was a suspense-thriller, so the extended flashbacks really slowed the pace of the story.
    As for backstory in general … I guess it all depends on who’s writing it. If it seems to flow seamlessly with the story, I probably won’t mind. Also (like head-hopping) before I started writing, I never noticed backstory dumps.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    I don’t like slowing down a mystery/suspense/thriller with a bunch of anything. There are breaks in the story which allow for that backstory/flashbacks but not in the middle of heavy-duty action unless it’s like a brief “life flashing before my eyes” type of experience which is slowed to a crawl in the midst of mayhem.
    And you’re absolutely right, Bren. I don’t think readers notice half the things editors have deemed as “wrong”. I think some of them have been out of touch with readers much like the politicians get out of touch with the real Americans. Most readers are very tolerant and will tread through miles of story if they like it without a single regard for backstory, head-hopping, adverbs, dialogue tags, etc. No big deal if the story grabs them.

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