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 Impact

Reading fiction is a practice, a hobby, an enjoyment, a treasure for those of us who infuse stories into our bloodstreams. We read novels because they provide us with all kinds of experiences in places we've either been or will never see in person, during the past, present, or future, and with people we'll either like, love, or hate who have all kinds of problems either just like us or like those we hope to never have.

So what happens when a book we read leaves us with a negative impact? It touches us alright but not the way we'd hoped. In fact, we wish we'd never selected it, started it, finished it, bought it, taken it from a friend, or promised to read it. We hate the stupid book.

There are two movies which come to mind immediately when I think of examples with negative impacts. I would add a third, but I didn't bother to finish watching it. I won't tell you what they are because I don't want to insult you. I hated them, although they were completely different kinds of films, one historical, one contemporary (but many years ago), they had one thing in common: arrogance. And by that I mean the older then-contemporary movie presented its slow-moving story of pathetic characters who appeared to think of their individual dilemmas as important, attaching such drama to their baseless personas while the producers and director assumed the audience would find their situations valuble somehow to the understanding of life in general. The historical film took a piece of history and gave its own interpretation of an event but not without the token sex scene and an exaggerated portrayal of the villainous powers-that-were. Pretentious wastes of a lot of money. Of course both films were critically acclaimed. I hated them. Totally. 

If you ask readers what produces a negative impact from a novel, it will depend on who you ask. Christians and unbelievers might agree on two similar responses: uninspired/unlikable characters and lousy plots. Beyond those, there might be some division in additional factors.

So, for you, reading a novel, what leaves you with a negative impact? 

 

Father, as writers we can't write for everyone, but we can always ask you for assistance to reach those to whom you direct us. Help us to follow your lead. Always. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.   

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4 responses to “Negative Impact”

  1. Brenda Anderson Avatar

    Predictability always leaves a negative impact. It’s one thing to expect a happy ending–that’s fine–but when the road to that happy ending has no surprises, that’s boring. Also, a happy ending doesn’t necessarily mean the book ends the way the reader anticipates.
    Stories wrapped up too quickly bother me, or a character’s sudden change without a believable vehicle to impact that change.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    Great points, Bren. I agree. Right on with the predictability factor and the sudden change. Definitely negative impacts.

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  3. BK Jackson Avatar
    BK Jackson

    Oh, lots of things can cause a negative impact. Complete predictability, as Brenda A. mentioned. You also mentioned unlikeable characters. Bait and switch leaves a very negative impact too–ie. the cover and back cover blurb seem to promise you one thing but then you start reading and it’s something else altogether.
    But if I had to identify the one thing that shuts me down the fastest, it’s when an author only chooses to go for the low-hanging fruit in a story(which is completely subjective, I admit).
    I’ve mentioned it before and I won’t name author or book, but I began reading a historical that had both bait and switch and low hanging fruit problems. The back cover copy sounded fantastic. The lead male character had a terrific storyline that could’ve been followed with sensational results. But the author chose to stick with the low hanging fruit, in this case, devolving it to just being about romance and ignoring the brilliant story line that was sitting there waiting to be exploited. That drives me absolutely insane. I vowed never to read their work again.
    Now probably 9 out of 10 people WOULDN’T have that reaction, so I was no doubt not the author’s target readership.
    But being able to tell when an author took the easy way out creates a lot of negative factor for me.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    Brenda, I agree. Bait and switch is possibly less numerous as the other tactics you mentioned but nevertheless causing a negative reaction to the author and story. If the story is primarily a romance or an historical or a thriller: make it so. Period. Don’t beguile the potential reader with cover and back cover deception.

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