Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

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    Reading other writers' thoughts on writing used to be reinforcing or totally discouraging for me. Although most of us have particular things we can claim to have in common in the process of writing, just as many of us do not have things in common in the writing process. Now this far along in my novel writing, having finished nine and working on number ten, I simply nod my head or roll my eyes at the processes of my fellow authors. 

    Keep in mind that I do believe the various processes are not only notable but even trustworthy. It's just that some of them could never work for me. It's also important to note that many of the differences come from writing in different genres and the expectations of those genres. Some of the differences arise from certain likes and dislikes of styles of writing and lengths of novels. 

    The "less is more" philosophy is valuable but it's not a rule that applies to all stories. While some genres (romance comes to mind along with thrillers) require formulaic adherence to generally accepted standards, there are far more variables in other genres and "less" isn't always conducive to stories that need more backstory or exploration of different facets in the storylines sometimes including character development. The "less is more" is supposed to apply to "tight" writing, to eliminate unnecessary words, sentences, phrases, paragraphs, and while that sounds reasonable and desirable, the hidden meaning can be to keep the word count down just for the sake of publishing books within wordcount parameters or for those readers who prefer "quick reads". 

    Now some of these writers are hugely successful with lists of bestsellers under their writing belts and resumés, but their usually solicited advice won't work for every writer. Because we're not carbon copies of each other, nor do our readers want or expect us to be, our disciplines (assuming we have any) and approaches, our genres and styles, are uniquely our own. That's not to say that we needn't pay heed to their practices and/or instructions. It is to say it might be nearly impossible or incredibly stifling to attempt to strictly adhere to all of them. 

    Some authors use whiteboards, outlines, tack up pictures of characters and/or locations, take copious notes before beginning the story, research extensively (which is necessary for their story topic[s]) and/or travel to sites they use, write first drafts without editing a word, rely on fellow professionals or keen-eyed friends for test reads along the way or when done.   

    To be honest, we each have our particular weakness(es). Some of us are sticklers for miniscule detail in certain areas that might bore one reader into a snooze or skip-page(s) action while other readers love that factor in the story. One thing we know for sure: we cannot please everyone or achieve perfection. And some objectors to our work are blatant militant one-star killer reviewers. Others of us write lean with a quick moving (even without being a thriller or action-oriented story) pace and a minimalist approach in the emotional states of characters or circumstances. 

    I love a long story, those 100K+ novels that take me along in the lives of the characters, giving me good dialogue – both external and internal – definitive expressions and colorful, picturesque details. When you combine those factors with exquisite writing, just wow. The Masterpiece (by Francine Rivers) was one of those novels for me. But there are many other readers who get bored quickly, have measured time to read, and who ultimately prefer novellas or the shorter quick-read full-length novels.

    And so there are authors to fulfill the specific needs of myriad readers – those authors with different styles, different methods of procedure, and different opinions on the art of writing.

     

    Father, thank you for writers and authors. I give you the thanks and praise for anything of value that I've written because apart from you, I can do nothing. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    Ah, yes. Another throwback to my "nicole by nicole" days, circa 1968, playing with my new Konica 35mm, in black and white. 

     

    Thank you, Lord, for waiting me out, to put me where I needed to be to find you who was always there. Thank you is never enough. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    Those who follow this blog know it's about reading, writing, and the work of God. It's not a mystery to see some days dedicated to book reviews, "tunes", and then a somewhat variety of whimsy, words, wistful thinking, and excerpts. Fairly predictable. 

    Some say blogs have become obsolete replaced by other social media sites which is to be expected in a world where technology grows ferociously fast. 

    For me, this blog is many things. An escape, expression, experience, exercise, and elation. Mixed in with memories, nostalgia, a bit of sorrow, and sometimes laughable occurrences. Every so often the indulgence of patriotism, tributes, and birthdays. 

    Other than being late with this post, I will continue to write on this blog because I do enjoy it and hope those who drop in here can find a few moments to enjoy themselves as well. 

     

    Father, please continue to help me do as you ask first and foremost, to inspire me and give me words and thoughts, and to guide my actions according to your perfect will. And please forgive me in your mercy when my mind wanders and strays. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

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    That smooth voice of Boz Scaggs. A great sound and one of his better known hits. 

     

    Father, may those who make music know from whom their gifts and talents come. And respond accordingly. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

     

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    The Man Who Never Was is Book 16 in The John Milton Series by Mark Dawson.

    John has summoned his best associates and friends in Ziggy Penn and Hicks and added Beau Baxter's son Chase to the mix for an elaborate scheme to get justice for his old friend Beau. It will require an enormous amount of patience and Beau's son hasn't managed a lot of that.

    They start the "play" in Amsterdam with a local drug dealer who hangs out at a club he owns. John "acquired" 5 mil in stolen money from his last escapade in Las Vegas, and he's outfitting himself in killer clothes and accessories to impress the dealer who is the link to the woman (La Bruja – The Witch) who heads up La Frontera in Columbia. La Frontera has absorbed and combined all the previous cartels under her "magical" fierceness and leadership. She's the one John wants. 

    The bizarre subplot which John has no knowledge of is the new "Control" has an arrangement with La Frontera, although the length and scope of it remain unknown to La Bruja. Her bodyguard is Number One in the resurrected Group 15. And what Group 15 has no knowledge of is that the Americans have been waiting for an opportunity to capture La Bruja with representatives from their multitude of alphabet agencies and Spec Ops ready to strike after an horrific bomb attack orchestrated by La Bruja. 

    The whole story is complex, catching John and his crew off guard but grateful for who ends up being involved. Chase goes rogue, determined to do what's necessary. It seems as if everything is going to end up tragically, but somehow the team rights its wrongs. 

    Milton's psychological realization that he needs that part of him he's tried to extinguish since he left the Group to accomplish this goal, has him focused on what he considers is the killer inside him. What he was. He's got to twist and turn his role to attempt to gain favor with these hardcore cartel-types and manages somehow to stay in the character he and Ziggy have created: the man who never was. 

    What John also knows at the end of this dangerous caper is that once again he'll be running for his life.

    Profanity present.

     

    Father, please continue to provide all that Mark needs to tell the stories he desires to tell. Apart from you, we can do nothing. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.  

     

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    Let  no one deceive you with empty words, for because of such things God's wrath comes on those who are disobedient. Therefore do not be partners with them.

     

    Ephesians 5:6-7 (NIV)

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    I'm having some unusual fun with excerpts today . . . 

    This is the Foreword to my novel Destination. 

     

    FOREWORD

     

    WARNING: This is a novel that presents Christianity. If somehow taking a look at the faith offends you, this book is probably not for you although you might find yourself in its pages.

    People in this world have their “come to Jesus” moments in both subdued and spectacular ways. They meet Him through family, attending events, visiting churches, talking with friends, hiking in the forests, the testimonies of athletes, or on country roads alone in a car the way I did. There can be abundant tears, mounds of regret, simplistic acceptance, unemotional responses to facts, or any number of reactions to the prodding of the Holy Spirit producing what the world has mockingly dubbed a “leap of faith”.

    In Destination both young and mature meet the Master. Their journeys are simple and complex, easy and hard, calming and perplexing, but always supernatural.

    And some refuse to accept His gift . . .

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    And my Foreword for Sweet Release:

     

    Foreword

     

    FOREWORD

    Be warned: this is Christian fiction. From start to finish.

    We are constantly besieged with what the world calls “love”. This book was written as a stark contrast to the multi-layered attempts of the world to define love. When I began this novel, I had no idea it would take the direction it did, but as with all of my writing, I trust the Lord has the contents in His beautiful, creative hands, and I am so blessed to go along for the ride.

    Love, romance, and sex are the subjects of endless books, films, television shows, and various other media efforts. Some of those efforts are educational and informative, others are purely for entertainment, and yet others demonstrate the most perverse nature of mankind. In Christian literature authors in the non-fiction arena strive to inform us about God’s intentions for us in love, sex, and romance. They try to diligently address the “normal” as well as the terribly destructive roadblocks to achieving freedom in learning to love at the spiritual, emotional, and physical levels. It is a divine task given the nature of our souls and the condition of our world.

    Since God is Love (1John 4:16), and since He is the Creator of lovemaking (Genesis 2:24-25), it is my heart’s desire to give readers a picture of the way relationships should be in contrast to what the world tries to sell us as the “real” thing. Christian couples are not immune to the hard sell of the worldly style of love, romance, and sex. Many have never been presented with a contrasting viewpoint. To me that’s tragic.

    Every now and then I need a novel that illustrates the goodness, passion, and the lighter side of being a human in love. A story of people finding love, working through their pain or hardship, finding real truth and meaning in their lives . . . Having said all that, I give you Sweet Release and hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

    Most of my writing is for adult readers, and this novel is no exception.

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    Hope you enjoyed the change of pace. 

     

    Father, thank you is never enough for all you've given me in my life. And I continue to thank you for every inspiration, every word, every story. Apart from you, I can do nothing. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

     

     

     

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    Relative Silence by Carrie Stuart Parks is a suspense with the mystery feel of a type of Murder on the Orient Express or the contemporary film Knives Out without the humorous touch. 

    Opening with a 15 year old argument between Piper and her then husband, the main story flashes forward to the present day where Piper resides at her Boone family mansion on the private Curlew Island in South Carolina. Having struggled through the last 15 years, Piper's life consists of funding an animal shelter and pondering what her future might hold if she could return to work. Every day she writes a letter to her young daughter who was taken from her on that day 15 years ago. 

    An old friend from high school wants to meet for lunch after contacting Piper so Piper arranges to meet her at a favorite restaurant on the mainland. While they're dining outdoors, shots ring out and Piper is thrown to the ground under the shelter of a man who whispers to her to stay down. Chaos erupts, people are shot, finally the police arrive, and the man who saved her life is taken to the hospital because he too was shot. 

    One of the only other inhabitants on the island leaves a message for Piper indicating she needs to speak with her, but when Piper walks to her home, she's not there.

    The detective in charge arranges for the man (Tucker Landry) who saved Piper to meet with her after Tucker who is a forensic artist sketches the suspect who fired into the crowd. All things considered, Piper insists Tucker come to stay at the mansion for his safety since he's just endured surgery on his leg. Tucker can't deny his attraction to the lovely Piper, and Piper is surprised at her attraction to the injured Tucker. 

    With those two both barely surviving tragedies in their lives, they need each other to get through the current realizations of what seems to be happening around the Boone family. 

    When the granddaughter of the missing woman is scheduled to arrive, more emotional chaos erupts along with hurricane warnings.

    The conflicts escalate, arguments persist, new truths are revealed, more wicked events occur, Tucker and Piper are separated in the storm, and the "whodunnit" is in full mystery mode. 

    Carrie has written some interesting characters, portraying well the handling of tragedies and the crushed spirits that result from them. The use of a handsome and heroic Newfoundland who loves his cookies is particularly touching. Relative Silence, a fitting title, provides another entertaining and quick read from this author with just the right touch to the ending. 

     

    Father, please bless Carrie as she writes for you and in every area of her life. Keep her safe from all harm and hold her close to you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen. 

     

     

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    . . . what you get? How often does that apply to you as a person? What do you see when you look in the mirror? Is that image who you are? What does what you see in that mirror tell you about yourself? Your history? Your personality? 

    Do you ever evaluate yourself by that statement? "What you see is what you get." Does that mean the image you project captures everything significant about you? 

    A mirror image reflects. But that's all it can do. Reflect the physical picture we present. So how often is that mirror image enough to depict who you are to a stranger? What does it say about you? 

    We can change that image and we do over time. We age, we dress differently. Sometimes we color our hair or it changes color on its own and we let it be. Everything we are or that we become can be reflected in an image, but is that image who we are or even who we want to be?

    Is that a statement we want to make? "What you see is what you get." Is that true for you? 

     

    Father, let me portray an image of who you designed me to be, the one who worships you in spirit and in truth. That's the one I want to be. Help me to be that one. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    Jim Morrison, the lead singer of the Doors, was a bit dark and unusual and died young, but with him at the singing helm of the group, they had multiple hits. This is the extended version of one their hits.  

     

    Father, there was a lot of darkness in those days, but you still gave gifts and talents and ministered to all who were seeking you through the evil. Thank you for always holding out the lifeline. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.