Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

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         After speaking with the young woman, I took a few moments to survey the group huddling behind the tape and to inhale the familiar fragrant aroma of horses, listening to the whooshes of their nostrils, some of them pawing their hard rubber mats at the fronts of stalls wondering what all the commotion was about. Brought back memories of high school summers spent working at the track, of underage drinking and girls who liked taking their clothes off, guys who loved it when they did. Funny how some things never change.

    (From WIP Race, Chapter One) 

     

    Father, it's impossible to please everyone with my words and stories. My first goal is to please you. Please give me the courage to complete this novel after a long spell of being away from it. Thank you for all you do for me. Apart from you, I can do nothing. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    Some serious greenery down this garden path with lovely flower accents. 

     

    Lord, your imagination and creation is wondrous. Thank you for it all. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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              They had some great ones. This is one of them. 

     

    Thank you, Lord, for the beauty in music. Not always happy but so often meaningful. Music takes us places and when we love it, we know you had a part in it. Thank you is never enough. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

  •                      Together at the Table - largest final

    If you're a "foodie", love "women's fiction", find researching your family's history fascinating, and are interested in the German invasion of France in WW11, Hillary Manton Lodge's Together at the Table is the contemporary story of lost and found love, a family's history of superb culinary skills, horrendous sacrifices, and persistent discovery. If you meet the criteria in the first sentence, this two part novel is for you. (And isn't that a lovely cover?)

    Two Blue Doors is a trendy restaurant with a family history that is setting the Portland (Oregon) dining scene on fire. Juliette and her brother Nico, their pastry chef Clementine, and the sous chef Adrian who begins the story falling for Juliette, all contribute to the fabulous menu offered to their growing customers. When Juliette's birthday celebration goes horribly awry, she designates assignments and goes to stay in Chicago with one of her visiting sisters where some puzzling pieces of information about their family fit into place.

    Juliette struggles with seeing her former love interest Neil and finally realizes she isn't over him when she returns to Portland to a terrible scene which causes her to reach out to him. Her family is scheduled to visit relatives at their chateau in Provence for the holidays, but Juliette and Nico are able to put together a fantastic "save" for their restaurant's Christmas Eve reservations.

    When the family travels to France, secrets are discovered about their history during the war. A diary reveals heart wrenching information none of them had ever known. (Although I really like the format, the entries in the diary are "handwritten" and the text is somewhat difficult to read.)

    Included in Together at the Table are recipes and specific preparations for the food mentioned in different parts of the story. Quotes about the intimacy of food and dining top each chapter. The unusual content/layout of this novel will entice a specific group of readers who will no doubt find it enjoyable.   

     

    Father, please continue to bless Hillary's efforts to create her stories with her own specific flair and care. Encourage her and inspire her as only you can do. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

     

     

  •      Put to death, therefore, whatever belongs to your earthly nature: sexual immorality, impurity, lust, evil desires and greed, which is idolatry. Because of these, the wrath of God is coming. You used to walk in these ways, in the life you once lived. But now you must rid yourselves of all such things as these: anger, rage, malice, slander, and filthy language from your lips. Do not lie to each other, since you have taken off your old self with its practices and have put on the new self, which is being renewed in knowledge in the image of its Creator. Here there is no Greek or Jew, circumcised or uncircumcised, barbarian, Scythian, slave or free, but Christ is all, and is in all.

     

    Colossians 3:5-11 (NIV)

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    Found another good one as far as composition. Touching. Loved it. A great message without the commercial aspect. 

     

    Father, you are Love. There's no one like you. Nothing like your love. We try to use the love you give us, but we just can't replicate your perfect love. Thank you for the moments when we feel yours so deeply. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

     

  •                                     A cry from the dust

    (Originally published on September 16th, 2015, as Hearing . . . A Cry from the Dust.)

    I always appreciate the depth of knowledge added to a story when the author has true experience in their subject matter. Carrie Stuart Parks, internationally known forensic artist and teacher, gives her character Gwen Marcey more than one of her lifetime experiences in A Cry from the Dust.

    A Cry from the Dust gives readers an intimate look at some facets of the Mormon church while weaving a creative narrative which qualifies as a thriller more than most do these days. Labeled a suspense, the story amps up after the bizarre death of a young woman who, observing forensic artist Gwen Marcey's death masks at an exhibit of The Mountain Meadows Massacre, faints. Later her carved body is discovered at the hotel by Gwen, and all the masks Gwen constructed are destroyed at the exhibit along with the occurrence of another strange murder.

    Gwen has survived breast cancer, her divorce, her ex-husband Robert's "fame" due to his degrading book about her, and now her life is in danger. She has a photographic memory and can sketch faces after minimal contact and can read body language with the best of them.

    FBI Special Agent Mike Brown is assigned to her and shares the information they have on some of the sects of the Mormon Church while eager to supply her with what she needs to lay a trap for whoever destroyed the exhibit and threatens her life. Agent Brown makes her feel somewhat good about herself again until her ex-husband unexpectedly appears on the scene to collect some things from the house and dashes those feelings. Gwen's 16 year old daughter Aynslee is caught in that in-between place of divorced parents and sides with her inattentive narcissistic dad because of her mother's decision for her temporary schooling while she had to work.

    The complex plot spins a convoluted plan to capture the architect of the murders by using Gwen's skills to reconstruct a Joseph Smith death mask. Gwen's best friend Beth, Aynslee, and her dad must take the finished mask with a tracking device planted in it, per Agent's Brown instruction, to a big conference on the west side of Washington state with Gwen meeting them later, allowing the perpetrators to think Gwen's alone.

    What happens after they depart sends Gwen into a frightful situation where she is challenged beyond what she thinks she can endure – and – almost can't.

    Carrie Stuart Parks has written a fascinating, intense story using a middle-aged protagonist with issues and mad skills as a forensic artist. She's courageous in so many ways, intelligent, sensitive, and refuses to give up without a fight. Gwen's voice entices us to root for her even when she reacts silently with bitterness and a hint of vengeance. She's authentic, she struggles, she cries, she pushes herself just to survive – a worthy character. Well-written with good research, this is a fascinating first novel adventure. The Bones Will Speak, Carrie's second novel, is available now.

     

    Father, you've been with Carrie through all her trials. You've given her tremendous skills and a determined spirit. Please continue to bless her life and use her to tell the stories you have just for her to tell. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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             Okay. Inviting and cozy or spooky and eerie? 

     

    Lord, you leave your evidence of hope, beauty, and Truth everywhere if we will only look and see, listen and hear. Help me to do that. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    Great songs by this group and this is definitely one of them. Love it.

     

    God, your beauty and creativity is never ending. Thank you for sharing it with your creation. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

     

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    My Monday musing . . . 

    In reading fiction, I've discovered there are certain kinds of female characters I never warm up to. However, to describe them is an exercise requiring specifics that turn out to be for that particular character rather than factors that make up a general rule. If I were to say I don't like "strong" female protagonists, that would be totally false. I'd need to add all kinds of qualifiers that would nullify the claim. Those of you who've read my reviews could easily determine I do, in fact, love strong female characters – just not a certain kind. What's up with that? 

    So. Let me qualify the characteristics I don't seem to enjoy in a female character. A character who is dishonest with herself drives me nuts. A character who overreacts to another male character makes me want to slap her. A character who sometimes acts like a victim and other times acts like a conqueror. A character who assumes she's doing the right thing when she goes off half-cocked. A character who is unwilling to admit she needs help. Well, I guess the list could go on and on, but I'll stop after this one: a female character who writes off men in general because of one bad breakup. Puh-leez. 

    Do you have stipulations in your characters which produce a "thumbs up" or "thumbs down"?

     

    Father, help me to define my characters in ways that people relate to, identify with, in some meaningful way(s). Teach me more about your creation always and help me translate it to my writing. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.