Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

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    Writing is full of twists and turns. Cliché as it might sound, it’s true. While a writer receives instruction to write the story of their hearts, in tandem they often receive how not to write it.

     

    The arguments of what constitutes good v. bad writing will never end. Of course there are qualifiers, but when you stop to really take a close look at them, most of the measuring factors address technique, grammar, and structure. And, yes, without a good presentation and understanding of grammar and story, chances are a writer’s work will not appear worthy of anything but family praises.

     

    There is some irony in that a good amount of things which are now taboo frequently preside in “the classics”. Does that mean writing evolved to a higher level by the standards of today’s elite editors? Not in my book (pun intended). Some of the statements made in instructing writers smack of simple prejudice. Gather a few writerly types together who happen to agree on what they don’t prefer in fiction writing and suddenly we have rules which castigate the use of prologues, adverbs, adjectives, dialogue tags, and the length of long novels among who the protagonists must be to sell. Somehow it’s assumed everyone likes the same thing—of course they just don’t realize it—and therefore all novels should read alike.  They’ve assumed the position of the writing government, the one who tells us what we should like because we’re too stupid to figure out what’s good for us and indeed what we need to like because it’s better for us than what we might prefer.

     

    The twists come when after adhering to the current rules, writers read the novels which definitely do not heed those same rules.

     

    I know most of us upon reading the innumerable posts on the rules cannot help ourselves when reading others’ work, applying the editing techniques spoken of by all those professionals. It’s an exercise in frustration and/or self-righteousness. You recognize broken rules and thereby attain some sort of educated platform on what’s supposed to make writing “shine”. But does it? Make writing shine? Questionable at best.

     

    I’ve abandoned reading published novels with the idea of critical examination. What’s the point? The books are published. They’ve passed the test—whatever the criteria. The book gets an “A”. It might not be my favorite, nor yours, but someone in the upper echelon of publishing liked it enough to invest in its worth. And if the rules were squandered or followed to the letter—it really no longer matters. If they were tossed away, obviously someone regarded them as mere “guidelines”, and if they were observed succinctly, then perhaps that house takes them seriously. Regardless of opinions within and without the establishment, the publishers bet their publishing dollars on the book.

     

    If the book sells well, the publisher collects on their bet. If not, then their gain is minimal and the author’s is even less.

     

    Learning the craft starts early on in life. At least it used to when I went to school. I’ve read a lot of high school level writing which would indicate this is not necessarily the case any longer. However, a writer, no matter what age, will absorb the craft via reading, study it outside of schooling, and keep after it until he/she gains an understanding, a voice, and the desire to expand and improve their creativity.

     

    The twists and turns of the writing journey are not outside of God’s scrutiny. We sometimes forget He’s involved. We ignore the ordained steps and assume too much of it all depends on our efforts to observe the protocols of publishing, on our abilities to write what editors supposedly want, and to present the perfect product after months and years of our admirable work. Such is the human factor.

     

    Lord, it all belongs to you. May we depend on you and remain desperate for you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    To the Lord your God belong the heavens, even the highest heavens, the earth and everything in it. Yet the Lord set his affection on your forefathers and loved them, and he chose you, their descendants, above all the nations, as it is today. Circumcise your hearts, therefore, and do not be stiff-necked any longer. For the Lord your God is God of gods and Lord of lords, the great God, mighty and awesome, who shows no partiality and accepts no bribes. He defends the cause of the fatherless and the widow, and loves the alien, giving him food and clothing. And you are to love those who are aliens, for you yourselves were aliens in Egypt. Fear the Lord your God and serve him. Hold fast to him and take your oaths in his name. He is your praise; he is your God, who performed for you those great and awesome wonders you saw with your own eyes. Your forefathers who went down into Egypt were seventy in all, and now the Lord your God has made you as numerous as the stars in the in the sky.

    Deuteronomy 10:14-22 (NIV)

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    No. Not anymore. Are you surprised by the so-called trends in publishing? Are you surprised by the rhetoric of individuals in the publishing industry making claims that don’t resonate with what you think, see, hear, and read everywhere on the net or in talking with fellow readers?

     

    I don’t hear/read a lot of them because if I took the time to read every professional’s blog who has something informative or of consequence posted, it would be a 24/7 endeavor. And let’s face it: one individual speaks the exact opposite of another many times over. So what’s the point? The point in visiting the many poignant sites on the web is that if you’re new to the writing game, there’s a ton of valuable information to absorb. If you’re so at the beginning of the gig, it’s difficult to apply a custom-made filter. After all, these folks are professionals. Inevitably, if you follow enough of them, you will ask, “What should I believe? What shall I do?” Who wouldn’t? And who hasn’t?

     

    I recommend stubbornness. Only because I am. However, it’s not for everyone. Actually, it’s especially not for those who aren’t famous writers. Or for those who might want to become one someday.

     

    You see stubbornness refuses to adhere to some of the commonalities of expression which tell us: “Male protagonists are not popular, won’t work, etc., in CBA romance and women’s fiction. Women don’t like to read about men.” Oh really? Just because male protagonists work everywhere else from the general market to television to films, they don’t work in CBA. Let me tell you something: I would prefer to read about men! I’m downright sick of whiny women. Or uppity ladies who think they can outsmart, outwork, and out-do men.   

     

    Being stubborn forces you to take a stand. To believe in something enough to proclaim it and stick to it. To rant on like I do about certain elements of publishing that don’t make common sense to this dullard. But, hey, stubbornness means you can count on disagreement, condescension, and at least a few tsks you can’t hear—you sense them more than anything.

     

    Why wouldn’t I write about what I like to read? Why wouldn’t I believe in the stories I’ve written? Why wouldn’t I think they have a place in contemporary literature? Not to say they’re all important pieces of work. Not to say they can’t be improved upon. But just to say: I’m not changing them to the point that they don’t resemble my work because what I write isn’t “popular, won’t work, fit, do in CBA”. No.

     

    What little phrases raise your ire? How ‘bout: “Speculative fiction doesn’t sell in CBA.” Smirk. That usually starts a discussion . . .

     

    Lord, my hope is in you. Period. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    Political discussions often end in vitriol. And we see a huge gap. An abyss between sides. No more can there be the phony bipartisanship which inevitably calls for one side to dismantle their belief systems and compromise their values to unite with the opposition. Few issues evoke agreement.

     

    The irony of politics is captured in being inflamed with rage when a good idea from the other side actually works. And to cheer the same side as it continues to produce ideas that experience abject failure.

     

    Commenting on my own state of Washington, we had several propositions and initiatives that addressed a state income tax, allowing a new tax on candy and beverages to continue, and another one to require that any new taxes must go through the people or carry a 2/3 majority in Olympia. The state income tax idea was crushed, thank God. The tax on candy and beverages including water was crushed (repealed), and the permission from the people for any new taxes passed. Okay, good. However, the citizens of our most populated and liberal county—the ones that literally provide a monopoly on most of our elections because of their populace—mostly re-elected all of the people responsible for these kinds of bills! Excuse me? King County in Washington state houses Seattle, a beautiful city where I was born and raised which is unfortunately a den of way to the left people who can’t seem to see the irony in voting down more taxes and electing those who propose and promote them.

     

    The woman in our state, who most likely will retain her senate seat, once said to school children in this area that Osama bin Laden built daycare centers for children in his country. This was after 9/11. ??? She voted for every spending increase the left has proposed. She lied in her campaign ads and was even chastised by our liberal rag newspaper. And yet . . . she continues to get votes for her spend and tax agreements with the Democrat leadership.

     

    There is a huge divide in the country regarding the definition or the construction and responsibility of government. Most of us who voted displayed our desire to continue the design and intent of our Constitution. We do not want Communism, Marxism, and/or Socialism. This country has flourished under the constructs of our Constitution. To abandon our way of life would create a dependency on government provision and control, a welfare state where the politicians live high and the citizens live low.

     

    Does anyone really know why Obama is going to India with an entourage of 3000 people, 40 aircraft, and the $2 million, yes, that’s million, a day in expenses?

     

    God, we’re desperate for you. And we thank you for your mercy. Please hear our heart cries. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.   

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    I could review The Great Gatsby since I finally read it, but it would be pointless really. So many opinions and reviews over all the years since it’s been written. I don’t know what it is about F. Scott Fitzgerald that I like, but I do. Plain and simple: I just do.

     

    Here’s my favorite line in this famous novel:

     

    . . . He was his wife’s man and not his own.

     

    Powerful line. Says so much about that scene. Wow.

     

    I could comment on all the “rules” he broke and yet the book is still considered a classic. I could add to that the hypocrisy of many of the rules since under their judgment at least half the classics would be rejected by today’s editors and publishers.

     

    I could elaborate on the authors I’ve come to love in recent times, but chances are I’ve done it too many times already.

     

    I could reiterate I’m a throwback to those times of writing when every kind of style and character appeared in literature, were no doubt judged, and for some fame came late. Or  not at all.

     

    Could . . .

     

    Lord, bring new insights to my soul, I pray. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    Okay. Facebook friends have been passing around their top 15 authors who most influenced them and/or their writing. Frank Peretti was my first thought. Reading Frank is like watching a movie. Tim George called his list eclectic, and I agreed that was a suitable word for mine as well. Citing Flaubert, Dostoevsky, F. Scott Fitzgerald, and D. H. Lawrence as some of my A-listers, I never completed a list.

    Instead I thought of non-influential authors. Those who garner raves, and I can't stand their writing. So let me tell you the immediate three who popped into my mind: Ernest Hemingway, William Faulkner, and Nathaniel Hawthorne. I have no fondness for Hemingway's sterile writing, but I maintain he was a good storyteller. I can't even say I liked Faulkner's stories, and I certainly found no enjoyment in his writing. Really don't have anything good to say about Hawthorne's voice, style, or his depressing stories. No desire to write like any of them. 

    What makes my first thoughts of Peretti impressive is that my writing chops were primarily developed on those long ago authors I mentioned. Peretti still stands out as the total package with the added dimension of spiritual insights woven exquisitely into his stories.

    How 'bout you? Any non-influential authors come to mind?

    Lord, you love us all. You disperse talent and gifting. I need your touch in my stories. Otherwise they're worthless. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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    In between the place you are and the place you hope to get . . . Not always a great place to be.

     

    Waiting on progress and facing a question mark.

     

    Disappointment looms. Discouragement tempts. Indecision threatens.

     

    The in between stands like a sentry. Forbidding passage.

     

    God is there. Here. Everywhere. He knows, instructs unseen. I long for His voice. The kindness of His touch.

     

    In between . . . feels unstable. Unproductive. Undone.

     

    As always, I’m desperate for you, Lord Jesus. Amen.

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    Who among you fears the Lord

    and obeys the word of his servant?

    Let him who walks in the dark,

    who has no light,

    trust in the name of the Lord

    and rely on his God.

    But now, all you who light fires

    and provide yourselves with flaming torches,

    go, walk in the light of your fires

    and of the torches you have set ablaze.

    This is what you shall receive from my hand:

    You will lie down in torment.

    Isaiah 50:10-11 (NIV)

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    If you haven't already: VOTE. 

     

    For:

    

    Freedom

    Life

    Our warriors who protect this nation

    Our Amendment rights

    America

     

    Against:

     

    Tyranny

    Socialism, Communism, Marxism/Big Government

    Abortion

    Suppressing the Military

    Welfare in all its unjustified forms

    Obamacare

    Injustice

    Gun Control

    Prejudicial Suppression of Freedom of Speech

    Prejudicial Suppression of Freedom of Religion

     

    Vote For: IN GOD WE TRUST & AND ONE NATION UNDER GOD

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    Friends, most of you know I detest self-promotion, so for this final gift suggestion I’ve decided to ask you to pray about the possibility of giving The Famous One to those relatives and/or friends who might somehow benefit from or be blessed to read Joey Parr’s story. Most of you know this novel is in no way written for the lovers of prairie romances and bonnet books, murder mysteries, or speculative fiction such as fantasy or science-fiction. Nor is it for those readers who feel offended when reading about the conduct of the lost. No. This novel is for those who search for love but have trouble discovering what it looks like, feels like, and acts like. This story is for readers who’ve experienced the emptiness resulting from trying the lifestyle the world offers. This book gives the reader a picture of a lonely young man from a broken home who unexpectedly becomes a film star and continues his search for truth, love, and a close family. This is the redemptive story of one person's life–a guy who struggled with his passions and finally . . . you'll have to read it to find out what.

     

    From the writing standpoint, it’s told as a fictional biography beginning with the omniscient point of view but gradually moving to third person.

     

    Written for adults, as are all of my novels, this story has been enjoyed by both male and female readers. I’m blessed to express the novel was endorsed by thriller writer Robert Liparulo in spite of our differences in genre and style.

     

    So. You might’ve checked Amazon.com to find the price of this novel and been surprised to see it costs $17.15 for a new book. The full retail price is $21.99. Let me explain the reason for that. If you take your average novel and open it, you’ll find a lot of “white” framing the text and between the sentences. The “open” template is usually used for the common word counts of 80-100,000 words for most (CBA) novels. The Famous One is over 141,000 words at 364 pages in the larger trim size of 6”X 9” with a tight template—in other words with very little “white” on the pages. More words, more story.

     

    My offer to you? You can buy The Famous One from me directly via personal check or USPS Money Order for $15.00 including “Media Mail” shipping for US buyers. Keep in mind Media Mail can take up to two weeks time but usually arrives in four or five days. Autographed if you’d like. Just leave a comment, I'll do the the rest.

     

    This concludes my 2010 Christmas in October suggestions for books. Hope you found some valuable ideas for gift-giving. 

     

    The Famous One 
     

     

    Lord, I belong to you. Everything I own is yours. Do what you will. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.