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Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

Um. Hmm. Well . . . Huh.

What are you really saying when you say the Christian message, theme, gospel, whatever, isn’t “in your face” in a story, a novel, an article, whatever? That it’s subliminal? That it’s in the background? That it won’t be noticeable to those who aren’t believers in Jesus Christ? That the point is showcasing good versus evil? That it’s just a “clean” read? What?

If I was an agent/editor examining a query for a novel—and, yes, this is just me—if I read in the submission that the Christianity wasn’t “in your face”, I wouldn’t read any farther. Don’t roll your eyes and huff away to another blog just yet. Don’t you want to know why? Okay, don’t answer that. I’m going to tell you anyway.

If something isn’t “in your face”, then the connotation is “it” isn’t aggressively put forth. Alright. If the gospel message is aggressively put forth some of us would associate it with potentially strong preaching as in from the pulpit or what we might hear at a tent meeting with an evangelist stirring up the people. Some would think if the Christian theme isn’t “in your face”, it’s hidden, possibly cleverly woven into the story so as not to be missed but concealed without overt terms to give it away or proclamations of belief systems. Others of us would assume if something is in your face, it is plain. Perhaps no holds barred plain, but out there and obvious for sure.

For me, when a writer states the Christian theme, message, gospel, etc., isn’t “in your face”, they are rationalizing including the message at all or making an excuse for not including it. By so doing, they are also—and I wholeheartedly admit this probably isn’t intentional—giving a backhanded slam to those writers who have chosen to put the message into readers’ “faces”. We all know each novel has a specific audience, some a lot broader than others. We know who we are as writers—and readers, for that matter—in that we might prefer characters who learn who Jesus is through the course of a story or via characters who live godly lives but struggle with this, that, and the other, or we prefer subtle themes contrasting good and evil in the contemporary or a fantasy world.

I know it’s just semantics, but there seems to be a trend here which goes something like this: Let’s just write a good, enticing, clean story with people who might offer a quick prayer in the midst of crisis or refer to a vague church background or somehow implicate a spiritual awareness without vocalizing it in obvious ways. The appeal will be broader, and just maybe God will use it to get some lost soul thinking about Him. Okay. Great. Just don’t infer to “in your face” Christianity in a story as somehow inferior.

A lot of the decision making process to include overt Christianity depends upon the genre of a story. Fantasy novels proclaim and are known for the themes of good versus evil. Christian fantasy authors often incorporate all kinds of Christian symbols within that thematic framework, and, frankly, this is where the vagaries seem to work the best. It’s easier to incorporate the concept of evil being a form of the devil and the good somehow being godlike or a type of savior.

Knowing what you intend to tell in your story is key. And whatever you decide is your mission in telling the story . . . just do it. Don’t make excuses for it. Don’t insinuate your way is best. Don’t rationalize your reason for doing it. Don’t insult those who choose to do it differently. Okay?

In your face Christianity is not a bad thing. Like any other approach: as long as it’s well written.

Father, as the old hymn states: I love to tell the story . . . Thank you, Jesus. I need you in my moment to moment existence, and I need you in my stories. Thank you.

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6 responses to “Not . . . In Your Face . . . ?”

  1. Jessica Thomas Avatar

    Nicole, thanks for the sweet note on my blog! Also, do you have any of your novel excerpts online? I’d be curious to take a peek.
    I can sort of understand why some people try to use subtle Christian messages in their writing. Society is so easily offended by Christ and Christianity nowadays. It’s almost like, “If I can sneak it in, maybe they’ll read the whole thing and I can plant a tiny seed.” On the flip side, this could be viewed as coercive. As you say, why not just be plain about it and let God do the rest of the work?
    The novel I just finished includes a Christian conversion, so, I’d call that pretty overt. I am still undecided about the novel I am currently working on. I know I want my main character to have Christian morals even tho he is not a Christian. There may only be a few hints of Christianity. Not because I am trying to keep it out of people’s faces, but because it is sort of a commentary on what could happen if God drops off society’s radar. So, overt Christianity would be unrealistic in context of the story.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    I would agree, Jessica, that the story dictates the inclusion/exclusion of Christian content. It’s the trend I see that I have personal objections to–the idea that a “good” story can’t have overt examples of the Christian experience to have any appeal. Yes, unbelievers will balk at those stories with overt Christian “messages”, but in the same way they won’t necessarily “get” those subtle references to God within the “clean” stories. However, that of course is up to God, not the writer.
    I completely acknowledge each Christian author writes to his own audience and tells the story the Lord has for him/her to tell, the way He says to tell it. Or I would assume so.
    I guess my point would be I would never exclude the essence of the specifics of faith to try to appeal to the world.

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  3. Jessica Thomas Avatar

    “I guess my point would be I would never exclude the essence of the specifics of faith to try to appeal to the world.”
    Yes, I agree, and I have noticed I need to be careful about this, because I have caught myself trying to look appealing to the world, just so they would listen to what I have to say about Jesus. But, in that case, my motives aren’t exactly pure. Do I really want them to discover Jesus, or am I instead looking to fit in with this world while also seeking confirmation of my own beliefs? I should be loving when I talk to people about Jesus, but I should not be worried about whether people are going to like me or not. Nor should I be using other people to try to answer some of my own doubts and questions. I should take those directly to God.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    You are so truthful, J. Love that about you. Well said.

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  5. J-J Avatar

    In my Christian science fiction novel, there are conversions to be sure, but only one is that of a human accepting Christ. The other conversions are that of aliens accepting their planet’s saviors. I say little about Christmas and Easter as such, but I have created parallels to Christmas and Easter on other planets. As C.S. Lewis has shown, one of the advantages of fantasy is that you can explore theological and ecclesiastical issues on a fresh slate.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    Yes, much easier to showcase these issues in sci-fi or fantasy worlds/concepts.
    The best contemporary novel I’ve read which dared to present other religions in the story was written by Randy Singer and titled The Cross Examination of Oliver Finney. Great book.

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