Into the Fire

Passionate thoughts about the world of writing and the Power of God

  • Bestselling author and my wonderful friend Robert Liparulo ponied up a worthy explanation to yesterday’s post, so for those of you who didn’t have the time to read it, here is his response:

    Nicole, you're right. Unconditional returns happen at all levels of book retailing and publishing. As Dayle said, it's a way of getting books that the retailer is unsure about on the shelf. Unproven authors have a chance to be found by consumers under this policy.

    However, it's painful to both publishers and authors. Publishers hold back royalties owed authors for a period of time so that future returns can be accounted for and factored into the "true" royalties owed (actual sell-through of the books). These amounts are often in the thousands and even tens of thousands of dollars.

    Some stores (usually Christian retailers; rarely mainstream retailers) will not allow authors to sign their books because the stores fear that then they cannot return the unsold but signed books. But most publishers including Christian publishers WILL accept signed books back. I wish publishers would make their policy of accepting the return of signed books clear to retailers, since signatures help move books and may result in fewer returns.

    The returns are very expensive for publishers. Shipping is one of the most expensive aspect of book publishing and distribution. And it reflects poorly on the author if a lot of his books come back unsold.

    "Lay down" is the term used for the number of books sold into stores (usually prior to their release dates). "Sell through" is the term for this number less returns.

    I don't think anyone except the retailer likes this policy, but I don't know how it can be fixed without harming the hundreds of unknown or up-and-coming authors whose careers rely on being in bookstores that would otherwise not take a chance on them. Interestingly, if booksellers carried only bestsellers, eventually there would be no bestsellers.

    Perhaps what's needed is a program that allows retailers to drastically discount unsold books after a given time in hopes of pushing them out, instead of returning them. But then that'll open up a new can of worms.

    (An exception to the return policy is when a retailer–often a specialty retailer like Scholastic or Wal-Mart–special orders a large quantity. In exchange for deeper discounts, they agree not to return the books.)

    I hope you will refer to yesterday’s post and read the responses.

    As per author Mike Dellosso’s suggestion, I took a trip to the Family Christian Bookstore in my area to inquire about this policy. Here’s what I learned. Spring Arbor buys their books from publishing reps. Spring Arbor in turn sends their selections to the retail stores. Twice a year Spring Arbor sends a list to the stores of the books which can be returned for refunds. The individual stores do not order (other than special orders from Spring Arbor’s catalogue) the selections or decide what is returned. So, demographics obviously are not a factor in stocking individual stores’ selections.

    In visiting the Borders Bookstore I learned their books are decided upon and ordered by their corporate headquarters. Any refunds on books are also decided by their corporate people. I also “heard” that the beautiful store in this particular mall might not be there much longer. Rumors have been flying for a couple of years about Borders going under. I’d hate to see it.

    Lord, you are our source for all good things. You are who we’re desperate for, who we truly need to lead us, who we ultimately desire to please. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

  • There’s a policy in place in publishing that makes zero sense. It’s a return policy that allows all unsold books to be returned to the publisher. Now I’m no authority on this policy, so any professionals who want to provide clarification to this, please do. My understanding is exactly as previous stated. Unused, unsold, or even returned books can go back to the publisher for a full refund. Doesn’t matter that they were ordered, bought, and destined to take up shelf space. If the shop owner doesn’t want them anymore: they’re gone. And via this road, they end up in outlet Christian bookstores in bins which sell them for half of their full retail price or on shelves with sale stickers for $4.97 to $9.97 for softcovers and hardbounds alike—which is super for the consumer. For the author? Not so much.

     

    I don’t know how this policy came to be. I don’t know if it’s still in place for all CBA stores or if any retail outlet buying CBA books has the same privileges. Any current information on this policy is welcome here.

     

    Speaking strictly of such a failsafe policy, all retailers should be so fortunate to have this kind of guarantee in place for purchasing product. My goodness. This wipes out the shrewdness or wisdom of doing business. It’s like a bailout. If I guess this will sell and it doesn’t, I can just return it for its full value. Easy. That eliminates the possibility of executing true business skills and puts the “manufacturer” at a disadvantage, hoping rather than trusting that the product ordered will be sold and not returned for a refund.

     

    What am I missing here?

     

    Father, you commend shrewd business practices in your Word. You expect us to ask for and use the wisdom you provide to your people. Help us to be wise and profitable investors on this earth and in the Kingdom of God. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

  • My son, pay attention to what I say;

    listen closely to my words.

    Do not let them out of your sight,

    keep them within your heart;

    for they are life to those who find them

    and health to a man’s whole body.

    Above all else, guard your heart,

    for it is the wellspring of life.

    Put away perversity from your mouth;

    keep corrupt talk far from your lips.

    Let your eyes look straight ahead,

    fix your gaze directly before you.

    Make level paths for your feet

    and take only ways that are firm.

    Do not swerve to the right or the left;

    keep your foot from evil.

     

    Proverbs 4:20-27 (NIV)

     

    ***For all of you fathers who do your best to take care of your children and raise them up in the ways of the Lord, may the Lord bless you with new insights, much grace, and faith-filled children. Happy Father’s Day!***

  • Well . . . I used to drive a Nissan ’97 Pathfinder V6 named Black Beauty with 185,000 miles on it. As of this evening I drive an ’07 Explorer V8 also named Black Beauty (the second). Phew.

     

    Why is it when you ask CBA professionals what their favorite novels are, they inevitably list general market reads?

     

    Do you have an absolute hands down favorite author? I probably could give you my Top Twenty. But then I’d probably have to break them down into genres . . .

     

    Every now and then I do some crazy/silly things. How ‘bout you? I mean life’s too short to never take a risk.

     

    Okay, what’s your current favorite movie? I think mine is still “Alice in Wonderland”. I enjoyed “Ironman Two” but not as much as One.

     

    Lord, every good and perfect gift comes down from you. Thank you for being so gracious to me. There are no words left to express my gratitude. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.  

  • “What if?” is a question I’ve trained myself not to ask even though it’s the source question for many a writer’s novel beginnings. Used to put scenarios together and added to other stirring questions, the “what if” inquiry gets creative minds to thinking. Not so with mine.

     

    “What if” leads to fearful places in my life. I can always imagine the worst-case scenario without any prompting from questions such as this. I can see tragedies in motion picture clarity without even trying. Why in the state of this world would I even want to ask “What if” for me or for a made up character who is just short of being alive to me?

     

    And I know this “What if” question lends itself to the “conflict, conflict, conflict” factor of writing. How can I make it even worse for my character? Well, I’m not sold on this means of creating, and I think with certain genres conflict can be unreasonable and overloaded.

     

    My stories come to me via characters that literally come to life in an instant. My ninth novel which is on hold at the present time claimed its existence from an old song by The Marshall Tucker Band which I hadn’t listened to in years. One day I decided to find it on YouTube for who knows why. I decided I had to create the kind of guy who could live those lyrics. I didn’t ask “What if?” It’s not my way.

     

    I’m curious now. Do you use the question “What if . . . ?” to further your creative efforts in a story?

     

    God, you know it’s a question I can’t ask. One I try very hard to avoid. Thank you for looking out for me and helping me to learn more trust. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

  • Some children really do need a good spanking. Regardless of your views on styles of discipline or punishment, if you’ve ever watched a parent trying to reason with a two year old, you begin to wonder which of them is the most immature. I know. I know. Parents who do this insist their child comprehends their tone and is smart enough to figure out the problem—which means they can also understand the reason for the disagreement and the solution to the problem—uh huh. I’m sorry, but I have yet to see this work successfully. Discipline is required—at least biblically speaking. And it isn’t a fun little “serious” talk. It’s a good whack with a “rod”. Choose your weapon. Sorry.

     

    My point being is that sometimes we adults need a good whack with a rod to get the Lord’s message. We might not perceive ourselves as being argumentative or as being disagreeable to the Lord, but the Holy Spirit gives us ample clues to alert us to the fact that we’re acting superior to the One who knows all—past, present, and future. Could we be any more stupid?

     

    You might guess I’ve been in that unenviable position of having a difference of opinion with The Almighty. I’ve also been in on the kind, generous, and patient “clueing in” of the Holy Spirit as to how I was . . . well, wrong. Being the stubborn, self-righteous individual that I used to be a lot more than I am now, I received many warnings before the spanking arrived full throttle. It was no small deal. It ripped me to the core. The sad part of the whole mess was that I had it coming. Totally. And when it came, I knew it. From my head to my toes, from the inside out, I knew it. I can’t tell you anything more and I can’t tell you enough how devastating it was to experience.

     

    Switching gears a little bit here . . . discipline is at the crux of writing a novel. It requires dedication to finishing a project. To write for the Lord by His direction entails obedience. Writing is no better, no worse a gift than other assigned tasks. In a Christian’s life, the Spirit rules. We live/walk by faith, not by sight (2 Corinthians 5:7). We follow directions, orders, pathways ordained by God. It’s important we do our “jobs” regardless of reward. Our reward should come from pleasing God, and in the hope which declares blessing follows obedience. Determining what constitutes “blessing” is where we often get in trouble.

     

    Usually, the first novel is an awkward journey. Not for some, I’m sure. For me, with life requiring so much of my time, it took me 8 and ½ years to get that first monster done. The other five came in bunches. Then another. And then another. Now I’m back at square one with number eight. And I don’t want to get whacked for being lazy. Undisciplined. When you take a break from putting an entire book together, you can lose momentum and the drill it requires to get to The End. So with prayer I’ll stave off the disciplinary actions by disciplining myself to commit to the project because I love to do it and I need to do it.

     

    How ‘bout you? Is your discipline self-induced or heaven forbid God-enacted?

     

    God, for every time I disappoint you, please forgive me. I ask for the fortitude to continue doing what you ask of me. I’m desperate for you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

  • Psalm 130

     

    Out of the depths I cry to you, O Lord;

    O, Lord, hear my voice.

    Let your ears be attentive

    to my cry for mercy.

     

    If you, O Lord, kept a record of sins,

    O, Lord, who could stand?

    But with you there is forgiveness;

    therefore you are feared.

     

    I wait for the Lord, my soul waits,

    and in his word I put my hope.

    My soul waits for the Lord

    more than the watchmen wait for the morning,

    more than the watchmen wait for the morning.

     

    O Israel, put your hope in the Lord,

    for with the Lord is unfailing love

    and with him is full redemption.

    He himself will redeem Israel

    from all their sins.

  • You know who I mean? You send them an email to congratulate them on their book you just read. It moved you, made you laugh or cry or both, and you want to tell them, hey, good book. They don’t respond. Now if it’s a multi-bestselling author your chance of them getting your email directly might be slim, but if it’s a debut author or a mid-list author, the odds of you reaching them increase.

     

    Who knows why authors don’t respond—other than those who receive hundreds of fan letters a day in their inboxes. It’s a choice made by each individual how they handle attention from those who want to talk about, rave about, or complain about their work.

     

    Marketing is a hit and miss endeavor. What works in spades for one author does nothing to promote another. Most pre-published authors vow to answer every fan note—should they ever have even one! If an author manages to have major success, the odds of being able to respond to every fan reaches an impossibility. The author must resort to newsletters to blanket all fan addresses. Those authors tour and draw crowds at book signings, contrary to most such events for authors. They’re “livin’ the dream” of publishing success.

     

    Responding to “fans” is something to consider when you actually garner some. There are some wonderfully appreciative authors out there. Generous. Kind. Real. They love sharing their work with you and need your affirmations. Others not so much.

     

    The funny world of celebrity . . .

     

    Lord, we’re all just human. Some redeemed. Some not. This one is desperate for you. Jesus, you’re all I’m livin’ for . . .  

  • I think it’s just as important to understand who you are not as a writer. Less likely to mislead readers and receive aggravated reviews. I’m not saying you should mimic me in giving disclaimers to what you write. Good grief—I’m too protective of both readers and myself.

     

    But, seriously, as a writer, knowing who you’re not can often define who you are. And in that narrowing down process, you might discover exactly who your audience is or who you intend it to be. It might elicit more precision in your writing, and/or it might redefine for yourself what you really write or should be writing.

     

    I do think novelists can evolve to a degree. They either become tighter writers—which in my opinion isn’t always best, contrary to popular opinion—or they can change their genres. Expand their niche or their flair for new adventures. Angela Hunt and Travis Thrasher come to mind, although Angela Hunt hasn’t really “changed” a genre, she just continues to explore a multitude of story types which fuel her tagline: “Expect the Unexpected.” She’s a rare gem. Travis Thrasher still writes romance but has migrated to horror of all things. Can you attempt two such opposite genres? Yet he pulls it off.

     

    It’s important to concern yourself with both you who are and who you’re not. All of us desire a wide audience, but, let’s face it, even a small audience is hard to come by in the current writing world. The plethora of novels out there is a fair indicator of the uphill climb for recognition. As soon as all of the initial hype of marketing ceases for a debut or recent release, if enough people haven’t read and recommended your novel to others, it won’t be pretty. This is why platform is emphasized more and more with fiction authors. Who do you know who will go out and buy your book? Who will read it and recommend it to others? Who will give you a stirring review which will ultimately influence others to buy that thing? How do you reach the audience which will most likely experience your book the way you hope?

     

    Discovering who you’re not might be as important as learning who you are as a writer. For your sake and for your eventual audience’s.

     

    Lord, thank you for listening to me, for helping me write, for giving me stories. You’re the audience who matters most. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

  • There are so many things being done in marketing that simply don’t work. Some innovative in design. Some not so much. The problem with all of them is they take so long to measure.

     

    One of the major requirements in a book proposal is supplying your ideas for marketing your book(s). Identify your audience. Reveal why you’re the one to tell this story—as opposed to your soccer-mom or your ultimate-fighter neighbors. Supply multiple impressive ideas for selling this novel. Okaaayyyy. Right.

     

    Sometimes it’s easier to describe which people or people groups are not your audience. I find myself getting put in that position when my mind struggles to identify who would appreciate/enjoy/like/love my novels. Certainly not the devoted “bonnet book” or “prairie romance” readers. Not those ladies who read the “Love Inspired” line of romance novels because you will find the occasional “breast” word or the once in awhile “hell” word. And probably more sexual situations than these readers care to “experience”. Before this creates any controversy, I’m not mocking those who prefer extremely chaste writing. Everyone should have the opportunity to read the books of their choice. Period. But, as a writer and a reader, those books are not me. They’re not the readers for whom God gives me stories to write. And they should not fault me or any other author who doesn’t join them in their preferences.

     

    I created the tagline Relationship Romance Redemption to describe my romance novels, and now I’m thinking of expanding it to Raw Redemptive Romance or Real Redemptive Romance. No question I write for adults of all ages, and most of my books are written for women. The Famous One is not exclusive, having garnered its share of male “fans”.

     

    Readers who are like me read across the board. Maybe I should start writing romantic suspense since I so rarely read straight romance novels anymore. They got too formulaic, too safe and predictable, and it’s a rare romance now that captures my attention and my heart.  

     

    I guess I’m an unusual romantic. Low maintenance in real life. True romance that causes sizzle and sweat between male and female characters elicits all kinds of challenges for the defining of lust or love. This is the conundrum for people in our day. Which is it? Christians are not excluded from this quandary. I guess I write to them. And to those who’ve been through that journey and managed to come out on the other side—one way or the other. It’s a perilous trek for a Christian and often a thrilling but empty roller coaster ride for an unbeliever.

     

    Who’s your audience? Who do you want your audience to be?

     

    Father, you’re our audience for everything we write. May we always honor you with our efforts. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.