Into the Fire

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Dissection

Some writers read with a dissecting approach. They say they learn what works this way, what they like and how to do it in their stories. The only way I can read like that is if I have an assignment. And I rarely have anything assigned to me anymore. For awhile after the “rules of writing” kept blasting across the blogosphere, I “observed” some of them in operation in published novels. I also contended that novels religiously observing said rules became formulaic and dispassionate. In other words: boring.

Some of the no-nos in the “rules” don’t ring true for me. I don’t comply because they bring me no reading pleasure. Others work well but not in tedium. I’m convinced that those writers who mix it up once in awhile within their own styles and voices appeal to me more than those who follow a set method or consistently stick to the so-called rules of writing.

I overcame the observance of the rules when reading, but it’s easy to tell when a writer “lives” by them. It’s also easy to tell when a writer isn’t bound to them. Freedom is a wonderful thing when it’s obvious the writer has opted out of the rules by choice and not out of ignorance.

So how do you read?

Father, you designed us, giving us our talents and giftings. The variety in your world and your people can’t be calculated by the human mind. You surpass all expectation in creation. Help me to follow the designed path you’ve made for me. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

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6 responses to “Dissecting”

  1. dayle Avatar

    I do both. I’m reading for content. At the same time, I notice, subconciously, the execution of the writer.
    For instance, Sibella Giorella just demonstrated to me personally why first person is frowned upon. It just doesn’t work as well. I used to think differently and even wrote differently. This fact, however, doesn’t ruin the content. I can compartmentalize and still enjoy her novel.

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  2. Nicole Avatar

    I used to hate first person for the longest time. Lately it seems the majority of stories are written at least partially in the first person. I was recently told by an author friend that some editors like it because they feel the reader gets emotionally engaged in the story more easily. I think it depends on the story and the voice of the writer. Close third person for some writers is nearly first person, and that doesn’t work for me either sometimes depending on the author’s skills.
    I’m curious why you didn’t like the first person in Raleigh’s “voice”. You were reading Sibella’s first novel, The Stones Cry Out?
    For me, the content and execution are absorbed. If an author is particularly clever with a technique, it’s easier to specifically note, but I’m an absorber.

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  3. Dayle Avatar

    I’m sorry, Nicole.
    That’s what I get for commenting while at work. I meant present tense. The first person can be really effective for the reasons you mentioned.
    Yes, I am still reading The Stones Cry Out.

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  4. Nicole Avatar

    I’ve read a lot of CBA novels recently which have used present tense, so someone must like it, huh? Why don’t you? What exactly doesn’t work for you or how?

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  5. Dayle Avatar

    It is becoming more popular. And my dislike of writing styles is fluid.
    I’m not sure what it is. It could be that I worked so hard at eliminating present tense from my own writing that I’ve become self-indoctrinally prejudiced against it.
    I tend to initially, by happenstance, write my scenes in present tense because as I’m envisioning them, I see them in the present moment. Then I have to go back and transform to past.

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  6. Nicole Avatar

    Wow, Dayle. That’s a lot of writing.
    For me, it depends on the writer whether or not I like first person or present tense.

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